I like it's all coming together and I find it interesting that Angel is there watching them, I wonder why that is. I think that Angel not telling Buffy about spike is going to come back and bite him in the ass. I imagine Buffy will have a hard time trusting him after that. I'm glad she went back to apologize and hopefully they can move forward. I can't wait to see what happens next :)
I do hope that you continue to write this story. I absolutely do not like Twilight or any of the characters but you have done a masterful job on combining that genre with Buffy and making me enjoy reading it. Your portrayal of the Twilight characters is actually better than the original author's and that to me is the sign of a very good storyteller. Add that to the fact that your grammar is impeccable as is your spelling and this story is a joy to read. I was quite disappointed when it came to the end of the last chapter you had written.
Review By [Malyce] • Date [21 Jun 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]