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Review of chapter "Surprise" from ChefJackButler
Review:
I know this is a really minor point, but... blue jeans are older than Edward Cullen.
Review By [ChefJackButler] • Date [3 Feb 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from mscecilyunderwood
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Thank you for this story! Its he most plausible Btvs/twilight story ive read. Plus ive always liked the idea of Buffy and Lindsey together. Its sad that theres few authors who's willing to write stories of them together. I wonder if Lindsey's twin is a certain rough and sexy Hitter in the Leverage series? It'd be fun if that's the case!
Review By [mscecilyunderwood] • Date [24 Feb 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Love and Basketball" from JayW
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A few typos/left out words, and yet an enjoyable read...

And this is coming from an, "I HATE TWILIGHT" opinionated person.

Seriously.

I hate it.

And I read your story and could stand it. I even was like "HELL YEAH, hawt Jacob and Dawn action!" and the pairing of Charlie and Buffy is also awesome.

You took this hoooorrible written story (twilight saga) and made it really great. And I loved your take on why they are sparkly and have souls!
Review By [JayW] • Date [17 Apr 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from (Past Donor)Fritolays
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I LOVED the story! I can't wait for the sequel. I really want to see what Aro's plans are and how Buffy's slayer dream she had might play into it all. Please start the sequel soon :)
Review By [(Past Donor)Fritolays] • Date [9 Mar 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from maxthehobbit
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I've read some 'twilight' fan fiction and really hated it. I have n idea if it's a movie, a TV series or just books like Anita Blake. I needed a Buffy fix and decided to read this and was pleasantly surprised. I liked this even though it really had no action at all. I thought you were leading up to an action-type ending with these 'people' that said they were going to kill Buffy and her family, but that never happened and there isn't a sequel. Also the sun being behind the clouds and temperature being in the twenties ... well that isn't warm at all, fact is it's damn cold and missus ... did you mean Mrs.?
There were a bunch of typos, words left out and 'extra' words, but overall they were easy to figure out and didn't distract from the story much. I see you have about 2 dozen stories that have only a couple chapters each and are unfinished.

I hope nothing in real life is distracting you from writing cause you are a very good writer and it would be a shame to let this story go unfinished since you set it up for massive amounts of action.

Thanks for posting this, a good well-written unfinished story is a hell of a lot better than no story at all.
Review By [maxthehobbit] • Date [29 Sep 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Hi Eddy" from Angelskuuipo
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I got the funniest picture in my head when you had Dawn talking about how fun it was to irritate Edward. All I could think of was her singing "This Is the Song That Never Ends" or "I Am 'Enry the 8th I Am" or whatever the most annoying songs she could think of in her head to drive him nuts. Of course, that was before I read that he had a hard time reading her, but it still made me laugh.

I usually avoid Twilight fics, but this was a really fun read. Thanks for sharing!
Review By [Angelskuuipo] • Date [14 Jul 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Cousin Ed" from Angelskuuipo
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Your Charlie Swan is absolutely adorable. I'm really enjoying this tale. :)
Review By [Angelskuuipo] • Date [14 Jul 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from Whimsicality
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I absolutely loved this, sweet and fun with the perfect undercurrents of plot and angst. I love the big family vibe, and all the friendships and pairings so far. I definitely love the tantalizing little hint about Elliot and the Leverage team maybe coming in, and I can't wait to see what you to with the Volturi, and what happens when they learn just how foolish they were to underestimate the Summers and Cullens. Great job!
Review By [Whimsicality] • Date [17 Jun 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Settling in" from buigh
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LOVED the blatantly gratuitous fangirl scene. LOL
Review By [buigh] • Date [2 Feb 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from kesificus
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Can't wait for the sequel!! Thanks for a cracking read :)
Review By [kesificus] • Date [12 Jan 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Surprise" from kesificus
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It's really addictive reading, I'm almost disappointed that Buffy has to go to LA as I wanted to see how it was panning out here but its great plotting, whatever the timelines!
Review By [kesificus] • Date [11 Jan 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Friends" from kesificus
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This is great, really enjoying it so far :)
Review By [kesificus] • Date [10 Jan 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from glrasshopper
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To begin with, I have to say that I absolutely, positively, most assuredly believe that Twilight is the worst vampire story out there, and it is something that I can barely stand. I mean where so I even start with it? Sparkling vampires? What the f^(* was what's-her-name smoking when she came up with that messed-up idea?

So, anyway, I saw your nomination for the best portrayal of Buffy, so I figured I would give it a read, and now I find that I need to congratulate you. You took a story that I find to be absolutely ridiculous and turned it into an enjoyable read. You even came up with a decent explanation for the sparkling nonsense. I'm also now curious to see what you can do to clean up the rest of that abomination.

And bonus points for killing Kennedy! I admit that she may have been an okay character, if given more screen time, but the writers brought her in too late and shallow characters do not a good Willow-ship make.
Review By [glrasshopper] • Date [3 Dec 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Family- 2" from (Current Donor)Speakertocustomers
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I was reading this because of the 'Best Portrayal of Buffy' CoA nomination - I always try to read all the nominations before voting in any category - but I gave up after Chapter 10 because I just couldn't take any more. You're just churning out reams and reams of tedious exposition with absolutely no action or drama yet, after 10 chapters, and there aren't even any hints that anything is going to happen in the future.

Quite well-written but possibly the most boring story on the entire site.
Comments from author:
Yeah, it took me a bit of time to get to the drama, but I like to think I got there.

Working in a fandom that held no appeal for me was tough, I needed to reconcile myself to the characters first, so that I didn't end up murdering the lot of them for being so whiny.

All I can really say is thank you for trying? And maybe you'll like one of my other works one day.

But other than that, at least you thought that the boring stuff was well written :) *Beams proudly*
Review By [(Current Donor)Speakertocustomers] • Date [9 Sep 10] • Rating [4 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from Wrytergrrrl
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First and foremost I have to say that this story was just AMAZING! You really earned your nominations for CoAs. I loved Buffy in this piece. She wasn't too intense or tough but she wasn't too wishy-washy or emotional either. She was funny and bouncy and full of purpose and seemed to like herself. That is my favorite Buffy personality. I also really loved the way she interacted with Dawn. She wasn't too overprotective and they didn't fight all the time, which just becomes annoying after awhile. I think you wove the characters from the different fandoms well together. It was great to get to see the other sides of everyone's personalities - Spike with his poetry and history and Rosalie with her mommyness. By the end I have to admit that I was tearing up quite a bit. I'm glad that you made it a little more difficult for Buffy and Lindsey to just pair up, but still let them get some naughty business in. I always feel bad for Buffy that she doesn't get laid as often as the other characters seem too. I am excited and nervous to read the sequel when you finally write it. This story ended so nicely that I kind of want it to just stay there were everyone is happy and alive and at peace. They've all survived so much, I would hate to see anything bad happen to them. But of course I want to read more about their lives so even though I'm worried for them I'm still looking forward to the next story.
Comments from author:
Thank you for such a thoughtful and detailed review!

I don't know whether I'll ever really write a sequel of this per-se, but I will definetly be revisiting this universe.

Again, a huge hug and many a chocolate bar for a fab review~
Review By [Wrytergrrrl] • Date [21 Aug 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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