is there any hope for iron man 3 jump started your muse so you can add to this amazing story

Hey man, I've spent the last week rereading this series. Can you please pick it up again? Your style's fantastic, grasp of characters and situations second only to maybe tenhawk himself.
If not this, write more, post more. You're great.

Thanks for the reads.

Please update this in the future. Its one of the best fics on this site even if its a little underrated.

Well written. Well thought out so far. Well done on the characters motivations and "voices". Over all well played! Wish there was more.

A great story, hope you update soon as it would be a shame for this story to die.

Great story so far. It's really too bad the last update was in 2010, I've really gotten hooked and would love to read more. :( I wonder if there's any hope left for this story or if it's dead. I can hope for the former, but judging by how long it's been I'm suspecting it's the later.

This is a good story, but the problems that stop me from giving it a higher rating started a long time back... You constantly skip between perspectives and show so little of any one character its hard to develop any empathy for them also you've constantly focused on the next enemy instead of giving the characters time to grow and mesh with each other... Jenny and Xander haven't even really had time to bond unless it happened off screen much less any of the other Scoobs.

Then there's the point where instead of any action bringing good everything brings more shades of gray into the story. Diana was saved and yet she brought the Council crap down on them etc etc. Its to the point where shit is constantly hitting the oscillator and there's no room to breath or keep up with it. Characterization has fallen to the wayside so the next enemy could come up.

Constant enemies work in comic books or movies, but there's little to recommend it to a written format. We can't see the cool flashy powers or the explosions we just have to read about them and move on. Honestly I found myself skimming sections because all they were was yet more conflict.

My recommendation is to tone it down as for as conflict goes and work on your characterization and character interaction for a while if you ever are inclined to pick this back up again. Its a good story, but its difficult to read because there are so many different people doing disparate things and different perspectives being jumped back and forth.

Waiting for an update. Nearly two years, it's definitely time for one.

pleas update soon

I am thoroughly enjoying this story. Thank you for writing it

This story is win.

And more Luke Cage please.

i just noticed that you hanen't updated this story in a year. i hope you haven't given up on it because it is great i recomnded to some friends of mine to read. so i hope you add more soon

i just read all of this wonderfull series i hope you up date soon as i would love to read more.

recall reading the first few chapters of the start of you Iron Fist fanfic, but for the life of me can't recall why I stopped reading. Well fixed that issue by reading the first two tales and this one so far. DAMN was it a wild ride. I really like the Sons angle you added in. Enjoying the seeding you've done so far with other marvel cast for both the good and the bad. The tension between Watchers is great and I look forward to seeing how that amps up now that Xander appears to be getting in to bed with SHIELD.

I always thought that Elektra could be a great Potential stolen by the Hand and corrupted. Trained as a deadly killer and perhaps via their Dark Magic allowed to tap into a little more of the Slayer abilities.


Looking forward to seeing more.

-j-

This is the first time I've reread the entire series since you originally released this chapter, and it's just as impressive. I'm still astonished that you could merge BtVS, with the Marvel 'verse and SoA so damn well.

I'm hoping that you drift back to this story sooner than later, because I can't wait to see how Xander further interacts with SHIELD and how the fallout from the government knowing about his relationship with Janna plays out.

Keep up the great work!

Thanks. I'm still planning on getting back into it eventually.