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Review of chapter "Chapter Four: Weapon Plus" from deusexsububi
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I've spent the better part of the last two weeks rereading your Iron Fist series, really hoping you're not dead, and maybe praise could get you to write more.

Like to see you back in the saddle, with new chapters or even new stories.
Review By [deusexsububi] • Date [9 Nov 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Four: Weapon Plus" from LostDragon
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You really need to pick this story back up, the whole series is great.
Review By [LostDragon] • Date [6 Jun 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Four: Weapon Plus" from kelvin
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is there any hope for iron man 3 jump started your muse so you can add to this amazing story
Review By [kelvin] • Date [9 May 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Four: Weapon Plus" from deusexsububi
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Hey man, I've spent the last week rereading this series. Can you please pick it up again? Your style's fantastic, grasp of characters and situations second only to maybe tenhawk himself.
If not this, write more, post more. You're great.

Thanks for the reads.
Review By [deusexsububi] • Date [23 Dec 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Four: Weapon Plus" from (Current Donor)TheDivineDemon
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Please update this in the future. Its one of the best fics on this site even if its a little underrated.
Review By [(Current Donor)TheDivineDemon] • Date [17 Dec 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Four: Weapon Plus" from jhor
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Well written. Well thought out so far. Well done on the characters motivations and "voices". Over all well played! Wish there was more.
Review By [jhor] • Date [15 Nov 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Prologue: Birthday Party" from moringstar
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A great story, hope you update soon as it would be a shame for this story to die.
Review By [moringstar] • Date [2 Oct 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Four: Weapon Plus" from CageFire
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Great story so far. It's really too bad the last update was in 2010, I've really gotten hooked and would love to read more. :( I wonder if there's any hope left for this story or if it's dead. I can hope for the former, but judging by how long it's been I'm suspecting it's the later.
Review By [CageFire] • Date [19 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Four: Weapon Plus" from Godogma
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This is a good story, but the problems that stop me from giving it a higher rating started a long time back... You constantly skip between perspectives and show so little of any one character its hard to develop any empathy for them also you've constantly focused on the next enemy instead of giving the characters time to grow and mesh with each other... Jenny and Xander haven't even really had time to bond unless it happened off screen much less any of the other Scoobs.

Then there's the point where instead of any action bringing good everything brings more shades of gray into the story. Diana was saved and yet she brought the Council crap down on them etc etc. Its to the point where shit is constantly hitting the oscillator and there's no room to breath or keep up with it. Characterization has fallen to the wayside so the next enemy could come up.

Constant enemies work in comic books or movies, but there's little to recommend it to a written format. We can't see the cool flashy powers or the explosions we just have to read about them and move on. Honestly I found myself skimming sections because all they were was yet more conflict.

My recommendation is to tone it down as for as conflict goes and work on your characterization and character interaction for a while if you ever are inclined to pick this back up again. Its a good story, but its difficult to read because there are so many different people doing disparate things and different perspectives being jumped back and forth.
Review By [Godogma] • Date [15 Jun 12] • Rating [6 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Four: Weapon Plus" from Fayari
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Waiting for an update. Nearly two years, it's definitely time for one.
Review By [Fayari] • Date [15 Jan 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Four: Weapon Plus" from moringstar
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pleas update soon
Review By [moringstar] • Date [22 Jun 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Four: Weapon Plus" from Annjeela
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I am thoroughly enjoying this story. Thank you for writing it
Review By [Annjeela] • Date [7 Jun 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Four: Weapon Plus" from Frardowin
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This story is win.

And more Luke Cage please.
Review By [Frardowin] • Date [14 May 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Four: Weapon Plus" from kelvin
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i just noticed that you hanen't updated this story in a year. i hope you haven't given up on it because it is great i recomnded to some friends of mine to read. so i hope you add more soon
Review By [kelvin] • Date [6 Mar 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Four: Weapon Plus" from moringstar
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i just read all of this wonderfull series i hope you up date soon as i would love to read more.
Review By [moringstar] • Date [8 Feb 11] • Not Rated
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