Review By [vladt] • Date [8 Oct 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Tidying Loose Ends" from serenityselena
Review:
great story ^_^
Review By [serenityselena] • Date [11 Mar 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Tidying Loose Ends" from Gideon
Review:
Great work. This ties in well with your other stories in this series. I likes how you took out Xander and Gwen in the first chapter because they weren't on the lookout for humans, I guess they got a bit arrogant. And then they get themselves free before Giles can even call in the troops, very funny. I think they need to keep a closer eye on Dawn, at least Buffy will say so!
Review By [Gideon] • Date [22 Sep 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Tidying Loose Ends" from Bobboky
Review:
nice
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [29 Nov 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Tidying Loose Ends" from DeepBlueJoy
Review:
i know you prolly don't want to hear this... but SEQUEL!!!
very funny... Who the hell is Gwen, btw? Is she and original character or is she from the comics?
Peace,
Blue
*EDIT*:
No Disappointment here... I haven't read the comics either.. even though I have them!
Comments from author:
Chapter two of the sequel, Slayer vs Stargate, is being written. Gwen is my own character - true confessions time: I have not read the comics. I have picked up fragments here and there, but am pretty much just ignoring them. Sorry for any disappointment.
Review By [DeepBlueJoy] • Date [28 Nov 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Tidying Loose Ends" from AllenPitt
Review:
Ah--on the slayer side it looks like a smart move "make the military think it wasn't magic, it was high tech" --but from the SGC side, this plays into their worst fears--- very high tech used to pretend to be magical/godlike, ie Goa'uld types. It's so advanced (the tech) that it has to come from offworld. And all that. So, the SGC will be on the alert for them... It's funny in that each side is pressing the other side's buttons: one side sees "Initiative!" the other side "Goa'uld/alien!" and neither realizes the effect they're having on the other...
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [26 Nov 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Tidying Loose Ends" from mithrilandtj
Review:
Can't wait for more.
Review By [mithrilandtj] • Date [26 Nov 09] • Not Rated