Review of chapter "Welcome to hell" from sinkun
both fics are nice hope ur not leaving them for dead
Review By [sinkun
] • Date [12 Jul 11] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Setup" from grd
Slaughtering Umbrella troops is like swatting Initiative men or Wolfram troops. All just cockroaches. Eager to read more. Love Joyce, Dawn, and Buffy's reaction and no nonsense response.
Comments from author:
Yups, I figured they'd be good, but their facing a woman who's survived a large group of Las Plagas, another girl who's been fighting vampires for 3 years, and a girl trained by both of the above and living on the Hell mouth.
Their going to go down and hard. But i figured in a bit of an equalizer woudl be the guns since Buffy is good but bullet's would still kill her, and I figure Umbrella wouldn't care about the amount of men they sent as long as the message was delivered. So Buffy, Dawn, and Joyce kill 5 teams of Umbrella's tactical force, but in doing so get knocked out. i figured it was a somewhat at least fair trade.
I was tempted to have Buffy making puns, but I figured worry for her mom and sister as well as the sheer amount fo them woudl keep her busy.
Review By [grd
] • Date [26 Nov 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Setup" from eriktheviking
Cracking good writing but a girl portable fifty caliber chain gun?
Comments from author:
Yeah I know it's a serious stretch. But I wanted something that even if the user was incapacitated would keep firing a bit. Honestly I'm pretty sure recoil would break your arms with such a gun, and the I can't remember the word, like when you fire and bits of stuff break off from the impact force. Anyway, that stuff various small and sharp pieces of wood and tile would probably in that enclosed a space have seriously wounded Buffy and Joyce if not Dawn herself.
But I wanted something that even against over powering odds woudl level the playing field, so the machine gun came to mind, and in the game Chris Redfield uses said chain gun. So I figured Wtf and gave it to Dawn.
Don't worry Xander won't be using it probably unless I change my mind, and even then it wont' be in the game very long, although other alternative guns and such probably will be in the story.
Review By [eriktheviking
] • Date [25 Nov 09] • Not Rated