That was very beautifully done. You captured my attention pretty much from the first sentence and basically never lost it. very good writing, wonderful story. -X- Hanane
Comments from author:
Thank you so much for the review. I'm glad you liked it.
Review By [HananeELmokkadem] • Date [10 Oct 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
You didn't ruin a thing...it was wonderful and hard...you didn't take the easy way out with this story. Buffy's world is gritty, grittier than CM even, and you showed that. I loved the plot line. My only wish is that i would love to see a "years down the road" reunion of buffy and spencer. Great job!!!
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review. I'm glad you liked it. I would also love to read that, but I'm not sure I could write it. :)
Review By [SaiyaSith] • Date [30 Sep 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Pretty awesome story! Very realistic, especially the way Morgan and Reed were caught between a rock and a hard place due to the institutional pressures making it impossible for them to tell, what they know to be the truth. Do the right thing and lose your job - not really great incentive, but that seems more and more like how the world works. Only point of criticism is that the ending feels somewhat abrupt, but that is always a problem with magic as a solution I guess.
Comments from author:
I agree with you about the slightly abrupt feeling and the reason why, but as far as I could tell there was really no other way for it to end. Thanks for the review. I'm glad you liked it.
Review By [Anglachel] • Date [30 Aug 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Wow, this story was completely brilliant! It was so very well written and the way you had the two worlds blend was wonderfully done... It was very believable and pretty much seamless.
I also loved the twist with Buffy and Spencer having met years prior... Their interactions were amazing and I loved that they somewhat shared a connection.
And I really loved that Spencer and Morgan were the only ones who really learned the truth at the end as well... It was definitely different from other fics. Great job.
Very enjoyable and simply incredible story! Thanks for writing!!
Comments from author:
Thanks for the glowing review *blushes* Writing it was a blast and I'm glad you liked it.
Review By [LeaFairy] • Date [27 Aug 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
What a great story! I really enjoyed it--the world needs more Criminal Minds crossovers, if you ask me, heehee. Nice work with Reid and Morgan's characterizations.
Comments from author:
Thank you. And I completely agree. I'd love to see the category get bigger. :)
Review By [TwistedSlinky] • Date [23 Jul 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
I think this is great, the whole plot is realistic and the story is well-written. The only thing I wish you would do is a little proof-reading or spell-check because you've got some typing errors through the whole thing.
But again, I love the story. Thanks for sharing!
Comments from author:
Thank you. I do spell check with word (inadequate, I know) and proof read to the best of my abilities. For my other stories I have a beta, but I posted this one on the spur of the moment, planning to take it down if it flopped, and once it's complete it's hard to find someone willing to edit it. Glad you liked the content, even if the polish was a little lacking.
Review By [elvi] • Date [13 Jul 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Since I've actually managed to read this twice, I think I owe you at least one review. I like the mesh of the two universes, though I really would have loved to see the faces of Hotchner and the others if they'd had the big reveal. The ending was plausible -- especially given the relationship the world has with the supernatural.
Thanks for a good tale.
Blue
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review. Glad to know it's worth rereading. I wasn't quite sure how the others would handle it (there might have been yelling) and I didn't manage to make it fit, but I'm sure another story in the category has dealt with it more convincingly than I could have. :)
Review By [DeepBlueJoy] • Date [11 Jul 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]