Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Luna
haha. Oh, poor Ron.
Faith/Luna= interesting idea :) Of course, I adore Luna so to me it makes perfect sense to match her up with just about anyone! ;)
Review By [Luna
] • Date [15 Feb 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Ava
I liked the backdrop of Dumbledore and Giles arguing about responsibility and such and Faith's amusement with them felt right, but the attraction to Luna came completely out of left field and felt a little forced. You did manage to bring me back into the possibility of it with the mention of her prison ordered psychic evaluations though. All and all this was a nice ficlet.
Review By [Ava
] • Date [1 Dec 09] • Not Rated