Hey are you continuing this? I really like where I thought you were going with it. Your stories have depth and great world building.

Love ya lots

I love Xander and I love it when people get creative with stories about him -- I really enjoy x-overs and I happen to really like most of the characters you have pulled together, but . . . I have to stop reading this -- it is way too convoluted -- I know this is make believe, sci-fi and your own story, but so much does not make sense -- why are there 2 or 3 fathers for each baby? Just a way to pull more characters into this? Thought I caught some of the incest stuff, but I actually object even more to using a baby's DNA to make other babies. Wyatt never should have been included.

So many characters with altered backgrounds and relationships just makes it too hard to follow or remember chapter to chapter -- you have to spend so much time explaining everyone's background and connection there isn't much room for actual story, but I wish you luck -- you have certainly set-up a complicated AU. I have read and enjoyed many of your stories and greatly respect your ability, but with this one I can only wish you luck and hope you can make it work.

LUCK!!!!!!!!!!!!!

'blink blink' - what the...????
well - you've made me really confused. The amount of people and information in this story is massive... and the words simply don't match(the amount of people involved and the crazy plots and hints make me expect a book the size of LotR... or several). Normally I'd just say 'rewrite' or something, but from what I know of your stories this could simply be one story with lots of prequels and sequels.... So gonna wait with rating and such cause right now even reading through it is confusing.... Hope for more soonish:) or just a new story in general:P
Have fun writing... I think

I lvoe this story. I do hope that you continue this extremely funny story.

i would love to see more.

hey

Is this a sequel?

or are you planning a prequel?

'cause I'm kinda confused as to how xander knows everybody?

toni

I enjoyed this a lot. I don't understand why you would have Pru/Andy and John/Mary half sibling soul mates however. I would love to read more - especially how he met and intereacted with all these diverse people. The Care Bear revenge was awesome!

You are the second who spotted the incest overtone, I completely missed that while I was writing this. I'm going to make a correction on that.

Thanks
Calia

I really love this story but I'm finding Dean and Wyatt as fathers, or rather who they are fathers to, a bit squicky. Maybe it's just the way it's put down. Dean being the father to his own mother and Wyatt being the father of his aunt ... put in such blunt terms seems very incest-y, grandfather paradox-ish, even if it's not. I'd feel a whole lot better about it if Wyatt was the father of Mary and Dean of Prue.

I'm sorry, I hate giving reviews like this even if it is considered constructive criticism. I always feel so very guilty because I really do love the story (all your stories, really) and I'll still love even if nothing is changed.

You know, I completely missed that in the writing of this story and your right that is kind of icky. Thanks for letting me know. I am going to change that.

Calia

I really enjoyed this. I will look forward to any sequels you may write for this AU.

I really enjoyed this. Care bears are evil and should be part of the Geneva convention.

One question, you mention all of the NCIS characters but Timothy McGee why is that?

Just wanted to say that I liked this story A LOT!! I love how outlandish your plotbunnies are, yet they always seem to work!! Xander with TEN babies that have TWENTY daddies!! CRAZY!! The story was absolutely fun. THANKS for the laughter!

Loved this! Wish it was longer but happy all the same!

I love what you have written, and would love to see more from this story line. Like how Xander met everyone.

Wonderful story! I hope we get to see pregnant Xander making the Powers miserable in some way. And the Island sounds like it will be a busy and fascinating place.