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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Current Donor)Shieldage
Review:
Fairly cool.

Misfiled though, heh. Greek's a fraternity show ;) I think you may have gotten Miscellaneous/Myths&Legends mixed up with Television/Xena&Hercules.
Comments from author:
oops. Thanks :)
Review By [(Current Donor)Shieldage] • Date [30 Nov 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "chapter 2" from JoeB
Review:
Thanks, that was exactly what I was looking for.

Andrew better hope no one had a video camera.
Review By [JoeB] • Date [29 Nov 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "chapter 2" from Greywizard
Review:
LMAO at that last scene!! ;-)

And as another poster suggested, you really need to show some wannabe Big Bad trying to kidnap Andrew, or maybe succeeding in doing so, as part of his nefarious scheme and have the Scoobies try to figure out why they would do something like that. ;-)

Bonus points if you have Kennedy or someone suggest that the Big Bad might believe that Andrew is Buffy and Dawn's little brother, and that they can influence the Scoobies by holding him hostage, and showing Buffy's and Dawn's reactions to that idea. ;-)

Even more bonus points if you have the kidnappers get tired of Andrew's critiquing their hideout, their uniforms (or lack thereof), their kidnapping techniques and comparing everything to either Star Trek or Star Wars movies, or, best of all, criticizing what they're cooking and how they serve it and offering to show them how it's done and then somehow managing to blow up the kitchen and thus providing the Scoobies with a clear-cut indication of where he and the kidnappers are hiding. ;-)
Review By [Greywizard] • Date [29 Nov 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from JoeB
Review:
I think I'd like to see this one continue. You set up an interesting scenario, but I think it needs to go just a little farther.

Possible continuations could be someone from the Herc verse trying to kidnap Andrew, and the Scoobies trying to figure out why.

Or, Andrew has to have some powers, given his linage, and he accidentally uses them.

I agree with you though, personality wise I can see the connection.
Comments from author:
Ok, here's a bit more, may well continue it later, if I am inspired.
Review By [JoeB] • Date [29 Nov 09] • Not Rated
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