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Review of chapter "The Headmaster Ritual" from (Past Donor)Aynot
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This is a really great story so far; It would be awesome if you ever continued/finished it.
Review By [(Past Donor)Aynot] • Date [26 Feb 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Headmaster Ritual" from DemonChildeKyra
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Awesome story! I hope you continue it, I can't wait to read more! Definitely can't wait to see what all of the pairings are gonna be. I really like the idea of Ginny being a Slayer, she'd totally kick ass! And Remus being her Watcher is way cool! Please, please, please, PLEASE update soon.

Thanx & Laterz,

DemonChilde
Review By [DemonChildeKyra] • Date [13 Sep 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Headmaster Ritual" from sunday
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Hey mate. this is such an amazing fic! You've really put thought into developing a plot and you've managed to keep Buffy really realistic. I'm really curious to see waht happens to Ginny and everyone else. Especially what will happen to draco now that he's a seer. I love all the pairings you have so far and hopefully Snape will chill! He's the bext!
Can't wait for the next chapter.
love sunday
Review By [sunday] • Date [6 Oct 04] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Headmaster Ritual" from phoenix3
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Hey! sorry to hear you've been having family troubles, I've had some of those in the not too distant past, hospital trips and the like, so I know how it really takes up your time and wouldn't really leave you in the mood for writing. That aside, I think this fic is fantastic, you've got the characters pretty much down in my opinion, plus I love what you've got going on with Draco! Ok, so that'd be because I'm desperate to see him become even a little bit good in any way possible, but I think the plot you've started really does work. I came to the conclusion quite a while ago that he would never stop being evil of his own accord, but having him suffer could possibly make him re-think a few things. The way you've kept his arragance and stuff also makes it more believable, since he's really not the type to make a complete U-turn.

To conclude, real life obviously has priority, but I'll be ready and waiting for more of this, however long it takes, because it's such a good story. Thanx *grin*
Review By [phoenix3] • Date [20 Sep 04] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Headmaster Ritual" from Baibre
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blah...you gonna update? still having family crisises? ...is that spelled right? oh well...you get what i mean. i like this. and im glad its FAITH and not BUFFY at hogwarts. buffy coming is cliched. and im also glad its ginny and not hermione as the slayer becasue hermione as miss london in the slayer pageant is also cliched. ^.^ happily waiting for more!
Review By [Baibre] • Date [25 May 04] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Headmaster Ritual" from (Recent Donor)redjacobson
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I Like! Interesting take on Draco, it seems like he may be edging out of Blackhat territory. Are some of the other Sunnydale Gang going to be making appearances? It would be fun to see Willow and Tara's reaction to an entire school full of Wizards and Witches.

More Soon Please?

red
Review By [(Recent Donor)redjacobson] • Date [24 Jan 04] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Headmaster Ritual" from mutantkillerfrog
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I loved this fic so far. Keep on going! I haven't seen the 7th season of btvs so I was wondering what happens with Spike? love this fic!! continue on.
Review By [mutantkillerfrog] • Date [16 Jan 04] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of story "Una Familia" from Anonymous Reviewer
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WOW i like this fic a lot!!! everyone seems very in character. please update soon, you're a great author!
Review By [Anonymous Reviewer] • Date [7 Jan 04] • Not Rated • Add Comment
Review of story "Una Familia" from Anonymous Reviewer
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Great job! This story is highly entertaining. :)
Review By [Anonymous Reviewer] • Date [9 Dec 03] • Not Rated • Add Comment
Review of story "Una Familia" from Anonymous Reviewer
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Great job! This story is enjoyable. :)
Review By [Anonymous Reviewer] • Date [28 Nov 03] • Not Rated • Add Comment
Review of story "Una Familia" from Anonymous Reviewer
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YES!! A fic that has Ginny as a Slayer!! :D You have deffinately got my vote to continue this story. And having Remmie as her watcher? YAY!! :D lol but you gotta promise me one thing: Draco/Ginny and Ron/Hermione. K? ^.^ And are Angel and them going to make an appearance at all in this fic? lol just wondering. Don't forget Spikey and Sirius!! Okay, now that I'm done with the rambling bit...

CONTINUE! CONTINUE! CONTINUE!!

~Shadowstar~
Review By [Anonymous Reviewer] • Date [1 Nov 03] • Not Rated • Add Comment
Review of story "Una Familia" from Anonymous Reviewer
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a very good start. i can't wait to see what you've got planned. one little suggestion: have someone beta this for spelling and grammar-it'll flow better if you do. very well done. smiles, emmy
Review By [Anonymous Reviewer] • Date [1 Nov 03] • Not Rated • Add Comment
Review of story "Una Familia" from Anonymous Reviewer
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just a word of advice for the title- it should be something like una magna laeta familia - the adj have to agree with the noun...
Review By [Anonymous Reviewer] • Date [31 Oct 03] • Not Rated • Add Comment
Review of story "Una Familia" from Anonymous Reviewer
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Nicely done. You write well, and you've set up an intriguing situation. Unfortunately the latin... it's a bit worse that Rose thought. You see, "familia" means family property or slave, which I suspect is not quite what you meant :-) How about "Una Magna Laeta Domus"?
Review By [Anonymous Reviewer] • Date [31 Oct 03] • Not Rated • Add Comment
Review of story "Una Familia" from Anonymous Reviewer
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This is looking good. I prefer Ginny slayer to Hermione slayer stories. And I like that you've gotten Faith out of prision. Ron/ Hermione, Yay! I really hope you're able to keep that going. I will certainly keep reading whatever of this story you're able to produce.
But a comment about the (I assume) Latin. If it's not, you can beat me up, or whatever. Unus Magnus Laetus Familia should be Una Magna Laeta Familia, so the genders are all the same.
'Videre a de mater sanguis' doesn't mean anything. But 'Vide ab sangue ex matre' and 'vide ex matre ab sangue' mean 'see, by the blood from the mother.' Ex matre ab sangue videbis' means 'you will see by the blood of the mother.' If that's what you wanted. I had to drop Latin when I started college, your story gave me chance to open my dictionary again, for which, many thanks. And also for the story, please continue.
Review By [Anonymous Reviewer] • Date [31 Oct 03] • Not Rated • Add Comment
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