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Review of chapter "New Additions" from narukyu
The pet thing still kinda sucks. I hope Lucifer leaves soon. Zachy is such a creeper... And yay for Gabriel and even baby!Ruby, because the images I get from this? Kinda hilarious. I keep imagining her as this tiny thing, always sulking... XD

I'm excited to see where this goes. Keep up the good work!
Comments from author:
thanks so much! I keep picturing Ruby as this tiny pissed off cat and I'm not sure why... it's a fun visual though :) I'm thinking of working on this some tomorrow, more cuteness and some progression of the story but we'll see how it goes.
Review By [narukyu] • Date [5 Apr 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "New Additions" from Leda
Interesting story!
Comments from author:
thanks :)
Review By [Leda] • Date [14 Mar 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Lucifer" from narukyu
So I wanted to dislike this story--mostly because I'm sulking about how the Supernatural category is catching up to the Stargate category in number of stories, and how it will probably leave Stargate gasping in the dust within a month or two. And that's my most optimistic estimate.

But then I actually read your story and it was all about omg!babydean/cas and good!Az and poor Lucifer and poor Castiel and how this pet thing just sucks, sucks, sucks... But in a good way, you know? I was reminded of that one movie--AI?--where that one boy robot acts like a boy and feels like a boy but they just treat him like a thing, like a possession to throw away. And that other robot movie with Robin Williams... anyway, I disgress.

I'm kinda hoping Lucifer takes David and runs. Or flies, as it were. Zachy is coming off as a real creeper in this story--as he does in canon, if I remember correctly. But, of course, if that happens, the Hunters will have to hunt him and that would be all pain! Angst! Conflict! Which, naturally, is awesome. And the premise itself? Also awesome. I don't think I've ever seen this done before.

Thanks for posting this. Good job and keep writing! :D
Comments from author:
wow, thanks so much! I was really trying to go for the whole slavery/possession vibe. It's not like anything I've done before and it's a challenge, but fun.

I remember AI and Bicentennial Man, they were pretty cool. So far you're the only one who's commented on the possession/pet part of the story, most people just focused on the cute with Dean and Cas.

Thanks for reviewing
Review By [narukyu] • Date [7 Dec 09] • Not Rated
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