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Review of chapter "chapter 15" from (Current Donor)Katrina
Review:
This whole series was profound and amazing. Thank you for sharing it.
Comments from author:
Thanks!
Review By [(Current Donor)Katrina] • Date [20 Oct 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "chapter 15" from PATM
Review:
In spite of all the twists that had me wondering what the heck was going on I'm disappointed
that it is over, not with the way it ended. Any follow up with Willow's view point of the ending?
Comments from author:
I am thinking of rewriting the end to expand it. I will admit it was kind of rushed. That's what I get for writing at 4 o'clock in the morning.
Give me a day or two to feel out any other reviews then we'll see.

By "disappointed that it's over" are you saying you want more?
That's kinna cool. Thanks! : )
Review By [PATM] • Date [5 Apr 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "chapter 15" from Mcspender
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Death and Rebirth, oh yes indeed =).
Very reminiscent of Asimov's "The Last Question" eh?.
And there's a lot of plot points, specially with the future war and Twilight plans.
Thank's for this series mate =).
See ya!!.
Comments from author:
Strangely enough I was thinking about Authur Clarke's "ChildHood's End" and "2001" with the Buffy Baby as the Star child.
That last chapter could have easily been another 10,000 words but I was up till 4am writing it and wanted to see it end ASAP.


OK, you heard it here first. I'm putting together the plot notes for The Slayers of Dune: Book II

Stay tuned more fun soon.

While you're waiting take a look at Tales of Ms. Kitty Fantastico: The Witch Killer

See Ya!
Review By [Mcspender] • Date [5 Apr 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "chapter 14" from Mcspender
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Review By [Mcspender] • Date [1 Apr 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "chapter 14" from Mcspender
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Good good, now Spike has the Gem and the fun can really begin.
And as usual, Angel is wondering what the hell is wrong =P.
Cool chapter, see ya!!.
Comments from author:
have you heard?
Angel is Twlight! Dude, WTF??!!
Review By [Mcspender] • Date [1 Apr 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "chapter 13" from Mcspender
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Poor vamp Willow, she really had it bad.
I really wanna see Uncle Dracula and Spike team up, I'ts gonna be epic =)!.
Cool chapter, see ya!!.
Comments from author:
Once again the world is saved by the Evil Dead (TM).
LOL!! : )
Review By [Mcspender] • Date [31 Mar 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "chapter 12" from Mcspender
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Holy Hell, Drac kicked butt, Hell yeah!.
Methinks the Halo has made a really big mistake saving Uncle Dra and Baby Buffy.
Cool chapter, see ya!!.
Comments from author:
Just a little McSpender inspired violence.
Me thinks the big round one can't stand to see his favorite slayer grumpy.
The Buffy-Baby is still connected to the ringworld at the quantum level.
The Ringworld make's a hellva baby monitor.

Next chapter soon.
Review By [Mcspender] • Date [27 Feb 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "chapter 11" from Mcspender
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Nothing like a good family talk to clear the bad vibes, heell yeah.
Specially when fatalistic older siblings are in full poor old me doom & gloom mode.
By the way, are we gonna see an Uncle Vlad Tepes A.K.A. Dracula VS Twilight A.K.A. Angel match =)??
I mean, it's time for Dracula to really cut loose and show how things are done old school.
Cool chapter, see ya!!
Comments from author:
You do love the Drac, don't cha?
I'll see if I can squeeze in a minor bloodbath before all is said and done
But I warn ya, there may be harsh language and entrails involved.
Thanks for the review!

More soon.
Review By [Mcspender] • Date [22 Feb 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 10" from Mcspender
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Apparently, the Darwin award of this year goes to the ‘Twilight’ soldiers who tried to stop Uncle Vlad Dracul, the most powerful vampire... poor poor little soldiers, they never had a chance.
The fight scene kinda reminded of this one http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4WCkowFnxJo

And yeah, Willow at last get it: vamps are not lovers, they are monsters.
Interesting thing about the rebel faction in the Ring, and how they are planning to get rid of Ouroborus.
Cool chapter, see ya!!.
Comments from author:
Saw the video.
NOW THAT'S WHAT I'M TALK'N ABOUT!

The evil dead are not our friends I don't care how much poetry they write!

Anybody here watch the show Supernatural? This is the season of the war between the angels and the demons.
Check it out. This is what happens when you don't have a strong central command.

Next chapter soon.
Review By [Mcspender] • Date [13 Feb 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 9" from Mcspender
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And Uncle Drac makes his move, and finds out the real game being played.
Nice to see Vamp Willow, wonder what part she has in the game??.
Cool chapter, see ya!!.
Review By [Mcspender] • Date [31 Jan 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "chapter 8" from Mcspender
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So Uncle Vlad and Willow are out of the equation, for the moment, and Dawn & Buffy are having a small time family discord about the subjet of Genocide.
And yeah, Spike is getting closer to his goal.
Daamn, this people really love looking for trouble =P.
Cool chapter, see ya!!
Comments from author:
Yep, they're all motivated go getters.

I can't believe no one commented on the reference to "Forbidden Planet."

More obscure references soon.

See Ya!
Review By [Mcspender] • Date [21 Jan 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 7" from Mcspender
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“Even if I have to burn this place to the ground and kill all thirty trillion inhabitants I will be free.”
It's just like Optimus Prime says, but not the way he says it.
Freedom, any kind of freedom can't come at such a cost.
Cool chapter, see ya!.
Comments from author:
Hey, this girl is pissed.
Or at the very least, very frustrated.
Look on the bright side. Maybe Spike will stop her. (hint,hint).
Review By [Mcspender] • Date [17 Jan 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 6" from Mcspender
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Guess uncle Vlad can't help himself sometimes; I mean,he was a prince back in the old land of Wallachia, and sometimes he just can't help being an old fashioned jerk =P.
Cool chapter, see ya!.

PS: Happy new year to you too mate =)!.
Comments from author:
Hey Guy,

Happy New Year! I've been gone for a while but I'm back in the saddle and ready to rock.

Update Soon.
Review By [Mcspender] • Date [16 Jan 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from Mcspender
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“I’m creating a doomsday weapon.” The future-Buffy said flatly.

Dawn inhaled sharply. There were over thirty trillion people on the ringworld.

“This is madness.” Dawn thought. “Madness!”

Oh yes, indeed is madness... (ok, I was gonna make a Sparta pun, but I think the joke is kinda old ; ) ).

Cool chapter, see ya!!
Comments from author:
ya know, I hesitated about adding a doomsday weapon but nothing sez ticking clock like the imminent death of everybody.
Remember, just because you build a doomsday machine does not mean you get to use it.

See Ya!
Review By [Mcspender] • Date [13 Dec 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "chapter 4" from Mcspender
Review:
So, two men of wealth and taste (ook, not so much in Riley's case) are entering the ring, let's see what they can do about it.
Specially Drac, I mean, he's waay too powerful.

Cool chapter, see ya!!
Comments from author:
Hey, the gang is going up against both the Ringworld and Twlight.
Everybody's going to be on the clock. Including the Buffy-Baby.

Thanks for the review!
Review By [Mcspender] • Date [12 Dec 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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