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Review of chapter "End of Day" from dcarson
Review:
You had a pointer to this in a review today. Are you going to ever add to it or is it dead?

Edit: I think I know what the mayor's clue means and I want to know if I'm right.
Comments from author:
It is not dead but the muse for that particular story is on vacation itself. I do have a vague idea of what will occur next but not enough to start up the next part of the series. Plus I have 12 other active stories that I'm trying to get updated as well. I do intend to add to it though. After all we need to find out how they handle Oz during the Full Moon.
Review By [dcarson] • Date [22 Jan 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Current Donor)WildMartin
Review:
Great story, I'd like to see the next installment.
Review By [(Current Donor)WildMartin] • Date [9 Oct 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "End of Day" from Nrahl
Review:
Really enjoying this story. Can't wait to read more when you have time. Keep it up.
Review By [Nrahl] • Date [16 Sep 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "End of Day" from Odin
Review:
I love this story, and to think I almost passed it by. You have done a outstanding job of keeping the characters true to their canon personalities. I can see lots of possibilities of where to take the story, though there will have to be bigger time gaps if you ever want to finish. However, having said that, smaller time gaps means more story for the readers. Hmmm, now I'm torn (lol).

I can see a couple of possibilities for a relationship for Buffy, but in either case, she'll have to share. Will it be with Xander and Cordelia, or with Willow and Oz. I guess you could also go with Giles and Joyce, but that seems a little too weird.

Thanks for the story. I am looking forward to the next one.
Review By [Odin] • Date [18 Aug 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "End of Day" from Bobboky
Review:
cool
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [17 Aug 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Meanwhile, back on the island" from Odin
Review:
Yet another great chapter. I really like the way you portray the characters; just like the show. Looking forward to the next chapter. Thanks for writing this for everyone to enjoy.
Review By [Odin] • Date [12 Jul 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Meanwhile, back on the island" from (Current Donor)dogbertcarroll
Review:
Good chapter.
Review By [(Current Donor)dogbertcarroll] • Date [10 Jul 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Meanwhile, back on the island" from snipehunt
Review:
Glad to see this continued like the story so far. Hopefully Xander's soldier memories contain the most important survival fact about a desert island which is a beach well. Just up the beach from the shore usually just past the first dune you can dig a well. Islands ,not surprisingly, always have lots of ground water the salt gets filtered out by the sand if you are far enough from the shore. You may not find a river , stream etc but dig a hole near the sea and you will always find water.
Review By [snipehunt] • Date [9 Jul 11] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Meanwhile, back on the island" from CPTSkip
Review:
Nice to see you didn't kill anyone. Yet. Somehow your island getaway isn't nearly as romantic as they show on TV and the movies. Lol! You know, with the Scooby luck, they are going to find buried treasure on their island. But of course gold and jewels would be totally useless to them and their survival. If they do, Cordy will go psychotic. Lol!
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [9 Jul 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Meanwhile, back on the island" from JoeDineen
Review:
More chapters quicker :)
They are going to have to get over their nudity taboo sooner or later and on the grounds of practicality should ditch the chothes now to preserve them for later when they are in a position to contact civilisation. Of course they may have to shed clothes slowly to adjust to the sun. Willow will have a awful time of it though.
Review By [JoeDineen] • Date [9 Jul 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Meanwhile, back on the island" from Tamojin
Review:
Absolutely loving this. I'm praying that your Muse continues to run with this idea for a while. If you ever have an epilogue, you so need to have them watching Les Stroud's Survivorman (the castaway episodes) and pulling a Mystery Science Theater. Can't wait to read more!
Review By [Tamojin] • Date [9 Jul 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Meanwhile, Back at Camp" from Duchess
Review:
Well OUCH!

Oh and what did Cordelia call Xander earlier? It certainly was NOT his name. LOL

Um, at least once a year, I try to walk on sand. It really doesn't take all that long, even there. But the exploring some too explains the time lag quite well. :)
Review By [Duchess] • Date [4 Jun 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Meanwhile, Back at Camp" from Duchess
Review:
Well OUCH!

Oh and what did Cordelia call Xander earlier? It certainly was NOT his name. LOL
Review By [Duchess] • Date [4 Jun 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Interlude" from CPTSkip
Review:
Nice to read what is happening with Angel and Faith. But we still have a frakking ciffhanger involving the Scoobies. I am enjoying your story a lot, but I really hope the next update is a wee bit quicker. The Mayor was an evil bastard, but at least he had a sense of humor. Lol!
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [4 Jun 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Interlude" from war
Review:
The mayor was one smart enemy who always thought ahead.

Good story looking forward to your next chapter.
Review By [war] • Date [3 Jun 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
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