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Review of chapter "A League of Their Own" from (Recent Donor)tchizek
Review:
Great story!
Review By [(Recent Donor)tchizek] • Date [23 May 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "A League of Their Own" from sistercity
Review:
Excellent in the way of Halloween stories but I don't think Fate is a great name for Xander. As Dr Fate is already out there he should have a different name with similar meaning like Karma or Kismet. Destiny is probably out as Xander never believed in it.
Review By [sistercity] • Date [12 May 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A League of Their Own" from cloudleonsgurl
Review:
I really loved it! Good job. Can't believe that challenge I put up ages ago caught on. :)
Review By [cloudleonsgurl] • Date [20 Mar 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "A League of Their Own" from AXanFan
Review:
I'm actually a bit leery of "Halloween" stories. They have been done to death, but sometimes my curiosity gets the best of me.

I was a bit intrigued by this premise -- It just seems to be incomplete -- are there or will there be more parts to this? It reads like a prologue -- I would be interested to see how they work out their dynamic and what happens to Ethan -- What about Giles and Angel -- is Oz around?

Please write more.
Review By [AXanFan] • Date [27 Nov 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A League of Their Own" from Morgomir
Review:
Great start. Keep up the good work.
Review By [Morgomir] • Date [8 Feb 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "A League of Their Own" from Chikageko
Review:
On the matter of Trigon, that's not quite right. I can see it being impossible for xander to connect Willow to him (though it would make for a more interesting plot) but the realoning is slightly flawed. Trigon isn't a chaos deity; he's very much into things being neat and orderly. Problem being he's undenigably evil and has an penchant for consuming any and every thing he doesn't have a use for on the planets he conqures.

How do you figure connecting her to nabu though? Or rather why? Ravens connection to her dad wasn't what gave her her powers, that was her soul it'self. Raven connection to her dad was simply due to the fact that, well, he's her dad. Her power is dark aligned and rediculously large because he was dark aligned and one on the greek TITANS (essentially making her a young goddess). Point of this question being with willow not being trigons kid to begin with there wouldn't be a connection so why make one to nabu?

None of that was a flame by the way, my one actual complaint is you didn't give the story enough content for the number of events you went through.
Review By [Chikageko] • Date [7 Feb 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A League of Their Own" from Jaylynn
Review:
Very interesting setup! I dont think Buffy would get toooo mad after she finds out it was for sentalmental reasons, aka remembering Jesse. Annoyed, yes. Angry maybe just a little. XD
Review By [Jaylynn] • Date [26 Jan 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A League of Their Own" from Bobboky
Review:
excellent
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [9 Dec 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A League of Their Own" from CarterOfMars
Review:
The story lacked something in the way of conflict\drama. However it's an interesting idea and a good first part. Something you could have done is have some of the school's bullies dress as villans for example or have Spike or so other vampire try and fail to take advantage of the situation.
Review By [CarterOfMars] • Date [8 Dec 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "A League of Their Own" from Dusel
Review:
This is really good. There are too few good stories about the gang going as heroes from either DC or Marvel. Though I think that the story lacked a bit of...drama? Yeah I think that's what it lacked - the events rolled just like that, the characters were the same, everything happening so easy that...it's not really a problem mind you, but it could have gone a little better.
Comments from author:
It's a little harder to have drama when you've only got Ethan for a villain. I thought about throwing in a few rogue costumes, but that would have made things a little more complicated than I'd like farther down the road.
Review By [Dusel] • Date [8 Dec 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A League of Their Own" from LFW
Review:
Great fic and Buffy as Superboy is very funny. Thanks
Comments from author:
I'm glad everyone seems to think so. I wasn't entirely sure about using him as a costume base but, it seems to have worked out.
Review By [LFW] • Date [7 Dec 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "A League of Their Own" from wyrmlord
Review:
i love it more please
Comments from author:
All in good time. I don't want to rush it. Quality before quantity, and all that.
Review By [wyrmlord] • Date [7 Dec 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A League of Their Own" from Markelo
Review:
Pretty good story! I think that there's alot of potenial to give this one another chapter.
Comments from author:
I intend to go further than that. I just wanted the 'origin story' to be self-contained.
Review By [Markelo] • Date [7 Dec 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "A League of Their Own" from Shadohime
Review:
Overkill much? :P

Nothing much will threaten this gang anymore, except for the Big Bads. Normal vamps will die way too easily for any of them to be satisfied.

Good story, and I wish there were more! :(
Comments from author:
Well, obviously, demonic threats aren't much to worry about, but they aren't just demon hunters anymore, are they? They're supaheroes! Which means there'll be super*villains* popping up before long, right?

And seriously, does *no one* read the Author's Notes? There's *going* to be more!
Review By [Shadohime] • Date [7 Dec 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A League of Their Own" from eriktheviking
Review:
A well written set-up.
Comments from author:
Why, thank you, good sir!
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [7 Dec 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
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