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Review of chapter "Presented without comment." from (Current Donor)DaveTurner
Review:
Now this is just naughty!

I like it.

DaveT.
Review By [(Current Donor)DaveTurner] • Date [26 Apr 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Pool Side" from (Current Donor)GothTroubleMaker
Review:
nice!
Review By [(Current Donor)GothTroubleMaker] • Date [25 Feb 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Pool Side" from (Current Donor)DaveTurner
Review:
Oh I wish I was there!

Does that sound weird?

Okay must be someway of getting this scene into a fic!

D.
Review By [(Current Donor)DaveTurner] • Date [2 Feb 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Protection" from (Recent Donor)mpop
Review:
Wow...
It's been awhile. Nice to see you back again.
Review By [(Recent Donor)mpop] • Date [30 Jan 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Woops, I'm back." from (Current Donor)DaveTurner
Review:
Nice to see you back with a new computer and a new editing program.

I'll be expecting to see some new Faith/Dawn pics soon then as they've been a major influence on the relationship between Faith and Dawn in my Grim up North stories.

Heres hoping for more!

All the best,
DaveT.
Comments from author:
Quite right! Now the only hard part will be finding pictures that work well together.

I am SO glad I could help with getting you to hop on the Faith/Dawn train. Thanks for all the reviews!
Review By [(Current Donor)DaveTurner] • Date [30 Jan 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Spy Games" from PiedraLumbre
Review:
Yummy! I especially like Dawn's outfit here, and those black and gold heels with the charcoal stockings are guhh-worthy. Also, I like the idea of evil cult parties, because those are totally the best part of the whole evil cult thing.
Comments from author:
Haha, thank you! Isn't that why people join cults? The fancy dress parties?
Review By [PiedraLumbre] • Date [15 Sep 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Golden Ocean" from (Current Donor)DaveTurner
Review:
STEAMY! And you're quite right I'd not have noticed that Faith's height and whatever were wrong.

What ever the girls are doing here they seem to be having a good time.

Keep up the good work, when ever I need inspiration for a Dawn/Faith moment I have a look at your pics.

DaveT.
Comments from author:
I'm so glad I could help inspire! I couldn;t get their heights to match up, but I liked the way they looked together in this pic too much to scrap it.
Review By [(Current Donor)DaveTurner] • Date [14 Sep 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Spy Games" from (Current Donor)DaveTurner
Review:
My only negative comment is that the picture seems to have been badly cropped on the right!

Other than than....WAY COOOL PIC!

I was only thinking the other day that I'd not seen any Dawn/Faith pics lately but this more than makes up for it. It inspires me to get on and finish my latest Dawn/Faith fic based on 'Carry on Screaming' would you believe?

DaveT.
Comments from author:
Yeah, the original image is of MT, and I couldn't think of a way to stretch the photo to the right more, so I had to do with just barely fitting in Faith.
Review By [(Current Donor)DaveTurner] • Date [14 Sep 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Guilty Conscience" from (Current Donor)DaveTurner
Review:
Cool pic.

Now I look more closely, I agree with Shybob...Dawn doesn't look very guilty/regretful at all. Naughty Dawn, the little minx!

See ya
DaveT.
Comments from author:
Oops? Tee hee.
Review By [(Current Donor)DaveTurner] • Date [25 Jun 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Guilty Conscience" from MistofRainbows
Review:
Okay that's just amusing. Almost makes me want to write something for that one, sadly I've got a couple too many projects going.
Comments from author:
Aww, maybe later?
Review By [MistofRainbows] • Date [24 Jun 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Guilty Conscience" from ShyBob
Review:
Faith looks like she feels guilty. Dawn...not so much.
Comments from author:
Heh.
Review By [ShyBob] • Date [24 Jun 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Save Me." from (Moderator)Saturn
Review:
I like these a lot. :) And now I'm also not the only one with a Faith/Dawn manip. Some of the pictures you used of Dawn are new to me. Do you have a secret source or have I just been slack on googling? Keep up the good work.
Comments from author:
Ah, thank you very much! And, yeah, I spend copious amounts of time on google. Seriously, I think my eyes might be damaged, lol.
Review By [(Moderator)Saturn] • Date [23 Jun 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Save Me." from Gideon
Review:
I liked the story you posted in the chapter and the pic too.
Comments from author:
Thank you! :)
Review By [Gideon] • Date [22 Jun 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Save Me." from (Current Donor)DaveTurner
Review:
OH! YES!

Great picture, not sure whether a background would have made it better or distracted from the characters. The way you've fitted these two (three?) pictures together is perfect. I love the expression on Faith's face (was that really Tru?) showing real concern for young Dawn.

Great stuff.

You may be glad to hear I'm writing Chapter Seven of my Severance fic. I've got to the messy bit where Faith and Dawn have to escape the human-demon hybrids through the forest. Oh! The blood and gore! Oh! The sexual tension between our two favorite girls!

See ya,
DaveT.
Comments from author:
Ooh! Can you hear my squeals of girlish delight? Because they're nearly deafening here, I'm sure! Can't wait to read!

Thank you so much for all the reviews! They really help out, keep me going! Can't wait to get inspired by your story! :D
Review By [(Current Donor)DaveTurner] • Date [22 Jun 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Captured?" from (Current Donor)DaveTurner
Review:
Ok a little BDSM for Faith and Dawnie! Pity Dawn's face is in so much shadow but it still works for me.

DaveT.
Comments from author:
Ah, yeah. I think I like it, I just wish the Faith part was better quality so I could have played with it more.
Review By [(Current Donor)DaveTurner] • Date [22 Jun 10] • Not Rated
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