Awwww. That's cute and sexy all at once! Great job.
Review By [Kristi] • Date [3 Feb 04] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Candy Kisses" from Anonymous Reviewer
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Nice. I thought the bit about some of the students pranking her was if not particularly joyful then realistic. I also found the wizardly 'enhancement' for the Hershy's Kisses to me... quite amusingly perfect.
and it's pretty clear that the story is complete, although a sequel would be welcome if you cared to write one.
Review By [Anonymous Reviewer] • Date [31 Oct 03] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Candy Kisses" from Anonymous Reviewer
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You are just the queen of the computer screen tonight. That was too delicious. Thanks for the great reading, Jinni. Again, feel better.
Review By [Anonymous Reviewer] • Date [30 Oct 03] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Candy Kisses" from Anonymous Reviewer
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Excellent! A very charming story! :)
Review By [Anonymous Reviewer] • Date [30 Oct 03] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Candy Kisses" from Anonymous Reviewer
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Cute! (And I know cute!=] ) I like it. Only a little problem: you meant dessert, not desert (that place with all the sand). Thanks for another sweet short story.
Review By [Anonymous Reviewer] • Date [30 Oct 03] • Not Rated