Interesting story. Hope there's more coming sometime soon.

I hope you'll update this story. I really, really like it. I thought that Buffy would learn Riven how to block her mind and learn her how to use her mind reading properly. I find it strange that Riven can read the mind of Buffy because she can block it. It's a Slayers thing .

again I really hope you will update this story.

Really cool story!

I enjoyed reading this. The whole thing worked well as a crossover. It seems finished though. I don't see elements that would continue the story any further. You'd have to develop something new for the characters to run through. Sure, the premiss hasn't been run through to completion, but that can be imagined and writing it out would just be extra wordage. Makes it hard to decide whether to track the story or not :) The story is good enough to track, but it looks complete and hasn't been updated in almost a year.

I really like Buffy's interactions with the crew, and the fact that she remembers her existence as a Summers. I also like that she is able to communicate with River better than the others. It would have been interesting if you had played that up a little more. Like having others notice that she was able to pick up what River was saying better than others because she paid such close attention to what everyone was doing that was close.

Very good story. Thank you for sharing it.

Awesome story. I can't wait to see what happens next. I wonder what will happen when Buffy and Jayne really get together, like what will Mal do? Please update soon.

i like the idea but buffy being the key, i would have though that using her blood would be bad.
i like the interatcion between river and buffy.

oh awesome chapter! I am so going to have to go back and reread the story again

Buffy antivirus.Yum yum.

Ah... cool... a possible retrovirus.

Well we know she had to do something, but I like the dramatic tension that it isn't clear to the reader yet... and maybe not Buffy yet... what she's supposed to do.

Really liked this bit of au-ey goodness and crossover interaction and characterization.

Nice addition of some physical descriptions of space and internal dialog from multiple characters.

Good dialog... could use a few more visual descriptions of where they are...or other five-senses details.

After one of the voices said "Great." I expected another one to say "Super."

Interesting take on the whole Reaver thing and I'm glad to see the update- always a good way to brighten my day. Thanks!

Thank you for the intriguing read.