this looks like an interesting story, well written too;)
I hope you continue it.

All of my writing has been on a hiatus. My husband died and life has just not allowed the opportunity to write. Thank you for the kind words

This was a great start, any chance of continuing it?

Love it! Can't wait for the next update!

Hello,
I like this story I haven't read these cross overs yet. Please, update soon. Keep up the great work and have a lovely day.

Smile,
Macala A.

Thanks for the review - mundane life has been really slamming. I'm studying for my CFP, and until November I probably won't update much. After that, I will (hopefully) be able to update more regularly. I really appreciate the encouragement though. :)

Nuala

Interesting start. I would suggest that you break up your paragraphs more. Whenever the topic changes you should make a new paragraph. Last paragraph for example: So when Sam's talking to Buffy and says one thing then the narration describes some thoughts or actions, go into a new paragraph. It helps the reader to read through your story if the paragraphs are shorter - plus it follows grammar structure. I like this story but I usually avoid ones with large paragraphs just because they are a pain to read on the computer.

Looking forward to reading more!

Thanks for the input - I'll try to pare the paragraphs a little more in the future.

Nuala

yay an update! glad buffy got it off her chest maybe she and sam can be friends. wonder what will happen when sookie tries to read her. update soon please! have a good holiday too!

Thanks so much for taking the time to review. I'm studying for my CFP, and until November I probably won't update much. But input from you and other reviewers helps me keep going.

Nuala

I love this!

Thanks!

Good chapter, I hope your story will be Eric/Buffy 'cause I love Eric ^_^

Thanks! As much as I love Eric, don't hold your breath for Buffy falling for yet another vampire.

Nuala

Great story. I really like the Sookie Stackhouse stories. Excellent chapter! I really enjoyed Buffy and Sam's interaction. Small bone to pick (don't let Sam eat it). I don't think Buffy would have shared so much information with Sam to start off with. More likely just the bare bones of being a Slayer.

I agree with your small bone - but I wanted to get it out of the way. Thanks for the review!

Nuala

Great chapter. I loved the interaction between Buffy and Sam...definitely not to talkey:) Can't wait for more.

Thank you. I hope to add some actual action soonish.

aww, sam is so sweet. This seems like a great start.

This is a great start, and i'm excited to read what happens next :). Update soon!

No whistler no portal no ptb and you have started a very cool beginning. Oh yeah, she's still a slayer! No oppressive destiny laid out in the first three chapters so I have hope for this story.

Very, very interesting.

One question, BtVS - the show- exists in the book series 'verse... Will you explain that in the story or ignore it?

I'm thinking ignore - I had actually forgotten about that. But I remember now, they would watch and laugh at the inaccuracies.

Liked this a lot. You going to stick to the book continuity or the television one?

Probably closer to the books than the TV series - but I rule nothing out ... :)