Very glad to see a new chapter at last. Love the way the story is developing. :) Eagerly looking forward to the next chapter.
Review By [leelaa] • Date [11 May 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Reflections of the Blind" from fabwishes
Review:
Great story so far, can't wait for Elektra to show up.
Review By [fabwishes] • Date [6 Mar 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Reflections of the Blind" from SeanWH
Review:
Um, one major continuity error I noticed. You have Angel pulling the dagger out from under his jacket in this chapter, but he'd already handed it to Fred one or two chapters before.
Interesting story so far.
Comments from author:
I've made the relevant change; thanks for pointing that out.
Review By [SeanWH] • Date [1 Feb 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Reflections of the Blind" from enderverse
Review:
I haven't seen Elektra but it seems interesting. I know more about the comics.
Comments from author:
No worries; knowledge of the "Elektra" film is not required for this story, as I only intend to use the basics of it.
Review By [enderverse] • Date [1 Feb 11] • Not Rated
Review By [Morgomir] • Date [6 Jul 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Urban Legends Meet" from leelaa
Review:
Damn good so far. Please update soon. Please.
Review By [leelaa] • Date [23 Jan 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Urban Legends Meet" from GACTsevil
Review:
My first thought was: oh, no! Angel don't attack him. I kinda want Matt to kick Angel's butt, it'll be funny. I can't wait to see what you'll do with it though.
Review By [GACTsevil] • Date [27 Dec 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Urban Legends Meet" from Morgomir
Review:
Great chapters. Keep up the good work.
Review By [Morgomir] • Date [27 Dec 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Target Number Two" from CarterOfMars
Review:
Intriguing build-up. Not entirely convinced that DD would work with W&H though.
Review By [CarterOfMars] • Date [15 Dec 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Target Number Two" from bucksavage
Review:
This is quickly become interesting. Good work so far, keep it up!
Review By [bucksavage] • Date [15 Dec 09] • Not Rated