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Review of chapter "A vampire and four hot gun slingers run into a bar" from Keedra
Review:
I am so tracking this. Awesome is all I have to say. Update soon please.
Review By [Keedra] • Date [23 Aug 14] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "A vampire and four hot gun slingers run into a bar" from deathgeonous
Review:
Hehe, this was funny. Well, thanks for writing this, bye for now.
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review. It was a bit of a crack fic, but I do think it was a nice little read.
Review By [deathgeonous] • Date [24 Jun 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A vampire and four hot gun slingers run into a bar" from Kammari
Review:
a very interesting story
Review By [Kammari] • Date [18 Jun 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "A vampire and four hot gun slingers run into a bar" from Blackguard
Review:
Great story thus far, looking forward to more.
Review By [Blackguard] • Date [10 Dec 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "A vampire and four hot gun slingers run into a bar" from JediKnight
Review:
Nice work on the fight, I hope you'll be able to post more soon.
Comments from author:
Me too, been a bit busy with life but hopefully I'll have something soon.
Review By [JediKnight] • Date [18 Feb 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "A vampire and four hot gun slingers run into a bar" from Orchamus
Review:
Damn, good stuff, been awhile since I found a good Xander gets married fic.
Comments from author:
Thanks, hopefully I'll have more soonish.
Review By [Orchamus] • Date [9 Feb 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A vampire and four hot gun slingers run into a bar" from LFW
Review:
I read the fic again and the addition and I enjoyed it all. Although chapter one is my favorite. Seras, Lara and Remy, but what about Giles meeting Xanders wives? Hoping for more. Thanks
Comments from author:
Yeah the first chapter was my favorite as well, I originally planned for it just to be a one shot, but well I'm sure you know how it is. I kind of had them go to Hellsing because I figured it would be an interesting way to throw in a large massive combat battle. I'm sure we'll get to see Giles and the other females reaction sooner rather than later. Ounce the bit of Hellsing stuff has been "Stitched up" then we'll probably have half a chapter dealing with the council people, and half dealing with Lara's mansion before the group ends up in a bit of a Black Lagoon setting for awhile.
Review By [LFW] • Date [14 Jan 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "A vampire and four hot gun slingers run into a bar" from sunamee
Review:
Another great update. I look forward to the aftermath.
Comments from author:
Cool, thanks, and thanks for the review.
Review By [sunamee] • Date [14 Jan 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "A vampire and four hot gun slingers run into a bar" from Jonathansicari
Review:
I generally like the style and writing of the story but I must say that I find the concept of Xander single handedly defeating Jan Valentine to be so unlikely as to border on the ludicrous. So at least I was laughing like crazy as my mind failed to suspend disbelief.

Other than that caveat, good show.

*EDIT* I'm loco. For some reason I transposed Luke and Jan. I thought Xander was fighting the blond brother (Luke?) not the guy with the 3rd eye watch cap (The guy Alucard thought might be a problem for a minute).
Comments from author:
Jan really wasn't all that tough. In the show he mostly just used two guns, which I'll admit doesn't mean he's weak but compared to vampires like Spike or Angelous or even other mid level vampires he was nothing. Jan was literally weaker than a fledgeling, he was made a FREAK a few hours before going into Hellsing, he used his Ghoul's as a shield.

Walter, Seras, or even Integra could have taken him out. The only reason Pip failed was because of the massive attack with Ghoul's he did. Jan was weaker than his brother and would probably have been weaker than the first vampire ever seen, except instead of standing in front of his soldiers he sent them to fight made them take multiple bullets and fired from behind them.

As I said don't quote me on this because I tried my best to find a streaming site with the OVA and I couldn't find it. So I honestly don't remember this scene in the OVA all that well at all. I've seen it in the original anime a few times so that's kind of what I drew from.

If what I've said above doesn't sway you think about it this way, first Jan underestimated Xander he was cocky and arrogant and someone like Xander knows how to use that. Second Jan never seemed like the type of guy who would stay calm ounce the crap his the fan. As soon as Xander countered him, he started losing control and his anger made him stupidly easy to kill. Also and this is somewhat of a biggie, Xander caught him by surprise and hit him with armor piercing bullets. I don't care how good you are having six bullets in your guts is going to hurt especially when you move. On his own Jan wasn't impressive, the other brother was but Jan mostly used his Ghouls to his advantage and Xander took those out.
Review By [Jonathansicari] • Date [14 Jan 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "A vampire and four hot gun slingers run into a bar" from eriktheviking
Review:
Great update, thanks.
Comments from author:
Cool thanks, and thanks for the review.
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [14 Jan 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Challengers arrive...." from sunamee
Review:
With the other ladies being at Hellsing, it is going to mess up Valentine's (Can't remember if it was that Psuedo-vampires name) plans big time.

I look forward to the next update.
Comments from author:
Yup, it will be a fun blood bath to come.
Review By [sunamee] • Date [1 Jan 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Challengers arrive...." from CrystalBlaze
Review:
Not bad. The iespell hit you up with the wrong word for the Valentine Brothers' *veritable* army, though.

I have this sort of issue myself at times. I'm praying for a thesaurus for my birthday next year..
Comments from author:
Do I want to know what I said? Sometimes I say things weirdly part of growing up in the south not to be racist or anything but particularly my state we tend to say words weird. Plus I enjoy making up my own words and throwing them into a conversation. I try not to do that with Fics but sometimes it shows up.

And that's cool, I'm too lazy to use one though...
Review By [CrystalBlaze] • Date [29 Dec 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Challengers arrive...." from Fyrloche
Review:
*snorts* He'll wish he had never seen a woman after that group gets done with him. And, God forbid if he manages to hurt one of them. What Xander would do then would probably make Alucard smile in appreciation.
Comments from author:
very VERY true. I'm planning to have a bit of a confrontation, after all if theirs a single group of women on the planet you don't want to call various insulting terms, it's probably these women.

I mean if Revy was your friend, she MAY just laugh it off then turn around and put three bullets in likely non lethal places. The rest though.... And when Revy is the least likely to be offended your screwed.
Review By [Fyrloche] • Date [28 Dec 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Challengers arrive...." from JediKnight
Review:
Pretty interesting, but I found a few small mistakes. Hoping to read more soon.
Comments from author:
Yeah I couldnt' find the OVA, so I guess I'm going to have to wing it.
Review By [JediKnight] • Date [27 Dec 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The next day" from LFW
Review:
Great fic, but how is Xander the slowest and yet not fourth? Rev, Lara, Faith and Xander makes four.
And Xander standing up to Sir Integra is excellent, I am just not so sure about him using his middle name.
Thanks
Hoping for more, especially Giles meeting the girls
Comments from author:
Well I figure Seras wouldn't be in the course.

And thanks, I'll have it up soon.
Review By [LFW] • Date [17 Dec 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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