Really awesome story so far! I haven't read the original version so I can't say if this revised version is better or not, but I can say I'm loving this one and it's really good! :-)
I love the idea of Willow at Atlantis and that she can communicate with Atlantis itself. Very cool and definitely helpful... well besides the whole being knocked out for three days originally =) I also like how you're slowly incorporating Willow into the plot - not rushing anything, kinda leaving her in the background so far, having her slowly meet everyone and not really making any big differences... at least not yet. It's a nice change.
I loved the image of Rodney creepiness over the ZPM. *giggles* Nice! I like that Willow was behind the restoring of some of the ZPM as well. Great twist.
Anyhoo, I look forward to hopefully reading more! Thanks for writing!!
Review By [LeaFairy] • Date [24 Jun 11] • Not Rated
I actually really like the revisions that you've done on this story...it makes it go much smoother and I like how they haven't found out how powerful she is/that she's a witch yet. I can't wait to read more of this!
Review By [Mwhahahaha] • Date [11 Feb 10] • Not Rated
Yay!! I was really excited to see the update. Loved Rodney's reaction to finding the ZPM and also loved Willow's reaction to seeing Rodney's reaction. Can't wait to read more.
at some point Willow will have to go public, if only to recharge a ZPM to keep the shields from failing. Or something like that... The SGA people won't be happy to find a 'sleeper agent' was planted on them, no matter what the reason.
Comments from author:
No, no they won't....hehehe. Thanks for reading! love xx Shezzi
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [31 Dec 09] • Not Rated
If she's going to be going through the gate with a team she should have a ZPM somewhere where no one has looked in the city yet that way she always has somewhere to put her "excess." BTW, I'm really enjoying this version. It doesn't feel rushed.
Review By [dreameralways] • Date [18 Dec 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from mithrilandtj
Review:
Nice one
Review By [mithrilandtj] • Date [16 Dec 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
hm, she's almost TOO talented & popular. Surely there has to be a negative in there somewhere? Frog fear while on an away team visit to the planet of the giant frogs? A former Sunnydale High classmate who is on the expedition & knows 'something' about her; not much, just that she was "in a gang" back in HS. ? Was always hanging around that 'highly functional schizophrenic, Buffy Summers" (as I think Amanda referred to her, ie that was the rumor about Buffy) -- Just a thought. Or who saw her 'avant garde' Talent Show ......
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [16 Dec 09] • Not Rated
Good way for her to spend her extra energy from the wormhole. Just how much did she charge up that ZPM anyway? And is she going to get a simlair charge every time she goes through the gate, or is the interglatic one going to affect her more than an interplantary one?
Looking forward to more. And do you think the city will get more than an intellgent animal personality in the future?
Review By [Thedruid] • Date [16 Dec 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
