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Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from Netchka
Review:
Just read again. Can't wait for the next chapters to be posted. :-)
Review By [Netchka] • Date [26 Aug 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from misdom
Review:
At this point, I doubt you'll update, but I really wish you would. I love how you have Willow interacting with Atlantis. She is definitely all powerful here, but not using her powers. She's keeping them hidden and not just waving her hand and making all the problems go away. I hate when people do that, and change the course of history, but everything still ends up happening the exact same. I can't wait to see what happens next, and what will eventually make her show off her powers to everyone.
Review By [misdom] • Date [3 Jul 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from HappyWonKinobi
Review:
This is an amazing fic! Please give us more!!!
Review By [HappyWonKinobi] • Date [21 May 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from LeaFairy
Review:
Really awesome story so far! I haven't read the original version so I can't say if this revised version is better or not, but I can say I'm loving this one and it's really good! :-)

I love the idea of Willow at Atlantis and that she can communicate with Atlantis itself. Very cool and definitely helpful... well besides the whole being knocked out for three days originally =) I also like how you're slowly incorporating Willow into the plot - not rushing anything, kinda leaving her in the background so far, having her slowly meet everyone and not really making any big differences... at least not yet. It's a nice change.

I loved the image of Rodney creepiness over the ZPM. *giggles* Nice! I like that Willow was behind the restoring of some of the ZPM as well. Great twist.

Anyhoo, I look forward to hopefully reading more! Thanks for writing!!
Review By [LeaFairy] • Date [24 Jun 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from ClumsyElf
Review:
Great story!! Hope to see more soon!!

SARAH
Review By [ClumsyElf] • Date [11 Apr 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from Raider
Review:
um...yeah, rodney's really creepy like that, and Sergeant Bates really is being xenophobic arsehole....

that's the kind of man you do NOT want on a front line team.

nice work.
Review By [Raider] • Date [14 Apr 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from AriaDragoncrest
Review:
Excellent
Review By [AriaDragoncrest] • Date [6 Apr 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from Mwhahahaha
Review:
I actually really like the revisions that you've done on this story...it makes it go much smoother and I like how they haven't found out how powerful she is/that she's a witch yet. I can't wait to read more of this!
Review By [Mwhahahaha] • Date [11 Feb 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from Colpinky
Review:
Good story thus far. I'm enjoying Willow's introduction in to all of this. Keep up the good work.
Review By [Colpinky] • Date [6 Jan 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from fanfictionfanatic
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Yay!! I was really excited to see the update. Loved Rodney's reaction to finding the ZPM and also loved Willow's reaction to seeing Rodney's reaction. Can't wait to read more.
Review By [fanfictionfanatic] • Date [31 Dec 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from AllenPitt
Review:
at some point Willow will have to go public, if only to recharge a ZPM to keep the shields from failing. Or something like that... The SGA people won't be happy to find a 'sleeper agent' was planted on them, no matter what the reason.
Comments from author:
No, no they won't....hehehe. Thanks for reading! love xx Shezzi
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [31 Dec 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from dreameralways
Review:
If she's going to be going through the gate with a team she should have a ZPM somewhere where no one has looked in the city yet that way she always has somewhere to put her "excess." BTW, I'm really enjoying this version. It doesn't feel rushed.
Review By [dreameralways] • Date [18 Dec 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from mithrilandtj
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Nice one
Review By [mithrilandtj] • Date [16 Dec 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from Raider
Review:
very well done with the zpm.
Review By [Raider] • Date [16 Dec 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from fanfictionfanatic
Review:
Another wonderful update! I loved the interaction between Willow and the SGA team. Can't wait to read more.
Review By [fanfictionfanatic] • Date [16 Dec 09] • Not Rated
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