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Review of chapter "29" from sdavidm
Review:
Well done. Just a small correction: you've often used 'confliction' when you mean 'conflicting'.
Review By [sdavidm] • Date [23 Oct 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "12" from sdavidm
Review:
Good progress here, but it seems Xander can't say anything to Faith without saying her name. It's kind of annoying. Real people don't speak like that, and Xander never did on the show.
Review By [sdavidm] • Date [23 Oct 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "3" from sdavidm
Review:
Good start, but you refer to Xander as Wesley on this chapter.
Review By [sdavidm] • Date [23 Oct 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "29" from bucksavage
Review:
I can't rememeber if I have reviewed this before....

This is simply one of the most amazing pieces of fiction I have read, period. You ran roughshod with stunning emotional, heart wrenching lows, and not only did it work, it was beautiful in its sadness. It was a tense psychological thriller, a drama within a drama within a drama.

The interaction between Faith and Xander, the way you had them in a proverbial tango the whole fic, that was very nicely done. It was the thread that held it all together.

I really enjoyed this fic immensly.
Review By [bucksavage] • Date [7 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "29" from Tjack
Review:
A lovely story, thank you.
Review By [Tjack] • Date [21 Dec 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "29" from lorwen
Review:
great story...
made me sad... happy... melancholy... satisfied...
good job...
:)
Review By [lorwen] • Date [24 Aug 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "4" from JCHatten
Review:
interesting how Faith is trying to destroy herself, I hope Xander can help her.
Review By [JCHatten] • Date [23 Apr 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "29" from ChiVayne
Review:
Thank you for this story, it was very moving. I feel you did a wonderful job showing the grieving process, and the beginning of the healing process.
Review By [ChiVayne] • Date [29 Mar 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "29" from Ghostrider
Review:
Sad to see it end but at the same time, glad it's over.

Lots of overpowering angst and hurt in this one. You made me feel for the characters, which is something not many authors can do. I do hope you'll consider writing a sequel or another F/X story in the future.
Comments from author:
I'm glad it was somewhat effective for you. I am indeed planning to write more F/X once I have ideas.
Review By [Ghostrider] • Date [29 Mar 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "29" from bucksavage
Review:
This was one hell of a ride you set up here.....thanks for sharing! I was on the edge of my seat the whole time. I also noticed a neat dynamic, you bound Willow's powers, which sucks, but it leaves an opening for a sequel when they inevitably unbind her powers and a new struggle ensues in her again to keep her powers in check, as well as her reactions to the burgeoning relationship between Faith and Xander. Thanks.
Comments from author:
Lol don't count on a sequel here...think this one's pretty much closed. Thanks for your comments though and I'm glad you liked this
Review By [bucksavage] • Date [28 Mar 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "29" from Walegrin
Review:
Thanks for letting us read this.
Comments from author:
You're welcome, hope you enjoyed
Review By [Walegrin] • Date [28 Mar 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "29" from (Current Donor)DeepBlueJoy
Review:
Thank you. I'm going to miss this story so much.

Peace,

Blue
Comments from author:
You're welcome. Thank you for all your comments.
Review By [(Current Donor)DeepBlueJoy] • Date [28 Mar 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "29" from JasonBarnett
Review:
I always hate that "binding Willow's powers" stuff. Always make me wish for an apocalypse that only she could stop.
Comments from author:
...you read all 29 chapters and that's your first, last, and only comment? lol
Review By [JasonBarnett] • Date [28 Mar 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "28" from bucksavage
Review:
Amazing chapter! You are really getting to the guts of the issues here. Willow has always been an emotional person but here and on the bluff, she lets it get into her so deep, it's like a dagger in her heart that tears apart everything, and she crashes, but when a wicca with her power crashes, everything goes to hell. It has always made sense to me that Xander stopped her the first time and this time, he has always been the yin to her yang, even if platonic. In the end, Xander has always been one keeping her centered.

The relationship Faith and Xander have been discovering is starting to come to some sort of tangible reality.

Excellent writing!
Comments from author:
Thank you :) What you say about Willow and Xander is very true, they compliment each other on many levels.
Review By [bucksavage] • Date [28 Mar 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "28" from (Current Donor)DeepBlueJoy
Review:
Beautiful. The interaction between Xander and Faith was tender and appropriate to who both of them are. You did wonderful.

Blue
Comments from author:
Thank you :)
Review By [(Current Donor)DeepBlueJoy] • Date [27 Mar 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
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