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Review of chapter "Landing on her Feet: Cordelia" from TroyGuffey
Review:
Very nice chapter.

One nitpick: Not EVERY city on a planet would have a space-port. Unless that's a feature of the Thundercat's setting.
Review By [TroyGuffey] • Date [25 Mar 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Landing on her Feet: Cordelia" from Harry
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Thunder. . . Thunder. . . THunder. . .THUNDERCATS HO! Its great to see only the second crosover story with this series. Found one other one on FF.net a while back involving Buffy and the Sword of Omens.
Review By [Harry] • Date [1 Feb 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Back in the Saddle" from Harry
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THe Lone Ranger eh? Not bad! Now, if you DO a new chapter to this tale, how about bringing in a decendent of the Ranger: THE GREEN HORNET!
Review By [Harry] • Date [1 Feb 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Back in the Saddle" from Harry
Review:
THe Lone Ranger eh? Not bad! Now, if you DO a new chapter to this tale, how about bringing in a decendent of the Ranger: THE GREEN HORNET!
Review By [Harry] • Date [1 Feb 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Mutated Halloween: Xander" from Harry
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I can see Xander as Drake. Our favorite goofball superhero. Now, lets see how things worked out for Willow, and see if we get any hints of Phoenix/Black Queen in the next chapter.
Review By [Harry] • Date [1 Feb 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Landing on her Feet: Cordelia" from Gulanticus
Review:
Mercy, I don't think I ever read a story involving the Thundercats! And I wish that you would continue the story. Perhaps there is something that I can use to persuade you with
Comments from author:
I hadn't seen any BtVS crossovers involving that show either. That's part of the reason why I used it - that and it worked well with the canon cat costume.

I do think that playing more with Cordeliara might be fun, but I'd really like to finish a couple of my WiP's before I start anything else. If/when I give her (or Iceman-Xander, or Percy the Lone Ranger) a longer story, I'll use the series function to link that to Mutated Halloween.

Bribery (while possibly interesting) is not necessary. What would be nice would be another day or two in the week - separated from RealLife so that I could just write... the dream of many, many writers : )
Review By [Gulanticus] • Date [6 Feb 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Landing on her Feet: Cordelia" from Artemis
Review:
I love this chapter so much! Your Cordelia and Cheetara "voices" are wonderful and I love your descriptions.
Comments from author:
Delighted that you enjoyed.

I was hoping that they would feel true to the characters, and show that while they are both confident females, there are distinct differences in personality between them.

I may have to come back to this Cordelia and see how this would change things...
Review By [Artemis] • Date [19 Jan 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Landing on her Feet: Cordelia" from Morgomir
Review:
Great chapters. Keep up the good work.
Comments from author:
Thank you.
Review By [Morgomir] • Date [18 Jan 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Landing on her Feet: Cordelia" from SFBKludge
Review:
I always knew Cordy could be a bit catty but this is ridiculous. :P

Theres never a Thundercat around when you need one. Good job making your own. Now lets see what else has happened.
Comments from author:
Cordelia's always been a character with claws, metaphorically speaking. Now they're just a bit more literal. She's certain that she can find a way to hide this...

Thank you. There's a lot of potential in that episode, and it affected a lot more characters than just Buffy and Xander (who's been the most often used in alternate Halloween stories that I've seen) - so why not take a look at some of the other people?
Review By [SFBKludge] • Date [18 Jan 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Landing on her Feet: Cordelia" from CPTSkip
Review:
I am really enjoying your series of stories. Showing us what happened to some of the non-Scoobies after they turned into their costumes is darn clever and I like it. I hope we see what the lasting effect of Helloween have for Percy, Cordy, as well as Willow and Xander. For instance, I wonder what adventures Harmony/Ivy had on Helloween night? Lol!
Comments from author:
Thanks! There was so much potential for chaos and change (Ethan's whole point), and so many other people affected. I've lost count of the stories that I've seen meddling with Xander's Helloween. I've seen a good many that change either Buffy or Willow so that they can play with the after-effects in a specific direction. (Not that I'm objecting to that right now - just saying that there's a lot of them out there) - but we so very rarely see that episode used for anyone else, except for a recent trend to add Dawn into the episode. Why not play with some of the other people in Sunnydale on that eventful night?


I decided that any Helloween fics with the people who were originally there that season would be placed into this entry/story as their own story/chapter (which leaves out Dawn who didn't exist yet). It's easier to organize that way, and it would be happening all at once. Should I get the urge to do a sequel, either specific to that person or in general, I can do that as a separate story, and use the series feature to link them together (that feature was a cool idea).

Another benefit is that since each chapter is a self contained experience for that person, I can update if/when the next one is ready without leaving everyone hanging about just how do things end that night for ______?

Now I just have to remember if/when Harmony gets a chapter that she went as Poison Ivy... I didn't want everybody to be going in costumes from the same source - how often do you see that in the real world? Though it would probably help her science grades...
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [18 Jan 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Back in the Saddle" from Dragonelf
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I have just reread this story and I hope you get inspired to continue it.

::Feeds the plot bunny::


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"Science is a way of talking about the universe in
words that bind it to a common reality. Magic is a
method of talking to the universe in words that it
cannot ignore. The two are rarely compatible."
- The Phantom Stranger, BOOKS OF MAGIC #1
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Review By [Dragonelf] • Date [11 Jul 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Back in the Saddle" from purrfus
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Wow. I can't believe prior to your story, I had never even thought about all of the other people who got costumes at Ethan's other than the typical little monsters. Really nice. I would like to see more someday.
Review By [purrfus] • Date [16 Nov 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of story "Mutated Halloween" from Anonymous Reviewer
Review:
I liked this a lot, although Percy was a tad out of charactor. No big though cause it's a writers perogitive to do what they feel is right. Other than that, awesome.
Review By [Anonymous Reviewer] • Date [28 Dec 03] • Not Rated • Add Comment
Review of story "Mutated Halloween" from Anonymous Reviewer
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Very nicely done. There is so much room to play with the whole 'turning into your costume' idea. I didn't understand a lot of chapter two but I did enjoy chapter one immensely, despite being comic-illiterate! Psychic Willow could be great fun – all of canon would veer off in a new direction! Hmm….

~Vesica
Review By [Anonymous Reviewer] • Date [24 Nov 03] • Not Rated • Add Comment
Review of story "Mutated Halloween" from Anonymous Reviewer
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What a fantastic twist on the quintissential Halloween Episode! Willow and Xander make an excellent pair of Jean and Bobby, you've handled their residual effects well. And LOL at Buffy finally learning French...silver lining? I defintitely look forward to exploring this alternate version of Season Two.

houses
Review By [Anonymous Reviewer] • Date [7 Nov 03] • Not Rated • Add Comment
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