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Review of chapter "A Dyke 4 guys & a comic shop with a side of nympo" from MavenAlysse
Review:
OMG! This was .... hahahahaha.... okay, weird, but cool. I'm looking forward to the next chapter. Thanks for sharing!
Comments from author:
I think that's a complement since most of Kevin Smith's movies are rather weird but cool. Thanks for the review.
Review By [MavenAlysse] • Date [20 Dec 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A Dyke 4 guys & a comic shop with a side of nympo" from Cdog
Review:
This is funny, I'll certainly give you that. Although you might want to work on the transitions a little more. One minute your talking about a flavor of ice cream and then did you see that giant wave slam into I'm gonna go get some pizza. Other than that not bad, not bad at all.
Comments from author:
Yeah, I felt the transition between a couple of scenes especially the "sex" scene was rough but I figured it kind fo had to be. also the part where they depart from Jay and Bob was a bit weird.

As for the Jay and Bob leaving scene I wanted to it be like well everyone has that friend that they like but sometimes the last place you want to be is by their side. So Xander just got the hell out of dodge. That's why I pulled a bit fo a bad transition scene, because Xander just turned and left them.

Thanks for the review, and comments, I hope to post more soon.
Review By [Cdog] • Date [19 Dec 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "A Dyke 4 guys & a comic shop with a side of nympo" from eriktheviking
Review:
Funny if in a head-shaking disbelieving way.
Comments from author:
Well, I wanted a story where humanity showed it's skills. A story where humans ((Atleast the majority of them were human)) didn't hide in the dark, but did what they did best. Banded together to wipe out a threat.

I'll admit it was more than a bit disbelieving, but it was just a one shot I wanted to get out so I jotted it down and posted it up.
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [18 Dec 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "A Dyke 4 guys & a comic shop with a side of nympo" from XanderHalcyon
Review:
Dude this was some hilarious shit. I hope you update soon.
Comments from author:
Yeah, ounce X mas break gets here I'll probably update.
Review By [XanderHalcyon] • Date [18 Dec 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "2 Stoners, 2 clerks, and an Angel...." from KyrissDraconis
Review:
You are on crack. Brilliant, but on crack.
Please smoke some more. ;D
Comments from author:
I'm always happy to smoke for Science. :)
Review By [KyrissDraconis] • Date [15 Dec 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "2 Stoners, 2 clerks, and an Angel...." from missinglink
Review:
Not bad, needs some polish. A good editor to correct the few misspelled words and such. The concept is alright, but considering canon have Xan refer to Metatron and Hans Gruber from Die Hard, not Snape. The movies weren't out at that time yet. Might also have Jay instead of saying about how the ladies should have gone at it remember and talk of getting a chubby when She kissed him. Also have Jay mention at the very end that Bethany still owes him some from the near end of the world moment when she denied him.

The star trek bashing was okay, and most of the story plays well and sets up well for a sequel if you want, just a little polishing and it could be a bit more spot on or note perfect for Smith's kinda verse.

Course if you do continue it then who else makes an appearance? Besides Bethany that is. Would require a little bit of digging to find the proper walk ons. Would be interested if there were a way to get Eliza Dushku's character from Jay and Silent Bob Strike Back worked in with the whole Faith of another name bit.

Will be interested to see if there is more. Good job overall here though. Later.
Comments from author:
Yeah I'm planning to have him refer to him as a few things. Hans Gruber, Severus Snape, I even though about Dracula for awhile. As time goes on he'll go from calling him the actor's name to various British names, just because I think it would annoy him and Xander would love too.

And trust me, Jay ((Shakes head a bit)) Jay is just starting, I'm planning on anywhere from one to four more chapters.

I'm planning to have a bit of everybody. the next bit will have Jay decide where they go for Lunch, and of course the king of the three dollar meal ((if he doesn't steal it when your back is turned)) will pick the place with the best Hot Dogs around, The Food court.

I'll also probably have a heaven scene with an Alternative Universe ((More cannon per say)) Cordy, Buffy, and Doyle as well as our two favorite fallen angels and a few others takeing bets on how much Xander screws up destiny.

I'm seriously trying to decide if I want to have Xander hook up for a night with the bi female who was one of the main characters in Chaseing Amy, or the one chick who was doing a sex study in Mall Rats. I think both woudl be in character not only for them, but for him as well. I'll have to look up their names, but I think it will work out nicely. I always want to call the one chick Amy for the obvious reason.
Review By [missinglink] • Date [14 Dec 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "2 Stoners, 2 clerks, and an Angel...." from Dragonwolftiger
Review:
Good Yoda speak. Job good, when able, continue this fic you must.
Comments from author:
I'm typing it up even as we "Speak".
Review By [Dragonwolftiger] • Date [14 Dec 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "2 Stoners, 2 clerks, and an Angel...." from XanderHalcyon
Review:
So funny I hope you update soon.
Comments from author:
I'll try to do an update tonight.
Review By [XanderHalcyon] • Date [13 Dec 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "2 Stoners, 2 clerks, and an Angel...." from (Current Donor)dogbertcarroll
Review:
LOL! It fits that crew, but not really Xander.
Comments from author:
Yeah, I figure Xander's feeling betrayed by everyone so he's kind of lashing out at the world. As time passes he might get to more Xander character, or he might stay a bit dark.
Review By [(Current Donor)dogbertcarroll] • Date [13 Dec 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "2 Stoners, 2 clerks, and an Angel...." from LFW
Review:
Nice idea. I am glad Xander got to make the high school go boom before God sent a task.
Comments from author:
Yeah, who doesn't want to blow their high school up?
Review By [LFW] • Date [13 Dec 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "2 Stoners, 2 clerks, and an Angel...." from eriktheviking
Review:
Great fun if a bit frightening at the thought of the Son of God with Xander's proclivities.
Comments from author:
I pity anyone who tries to Crucify the son of Xander Harris.

And yeah, I'm not sure how I'm going to pull that off, but I'm sure I'll think of something.
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [13 Dec 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "2 Stoners, 2 clerks, and an Angel...." from zabby
Review:
dude, gotta say this is an interesting fic. i kinda wanna see what happens if jay and silent bob meet a vamp or any of the scoobs. this is pure insanity of the good kind. couldnt stop laughing throughout. it would also be funny to see faith and/or meet sissy. ya xander is out of character, but hey thats why this is fanfic. so far i like it. keep up the good work. ^_^
Comments from author:
((Nods)) I can just see the insanity that might come form it. I'm sure they'll meet the scoobs eventually.

I'm really tempted to hook Xander up with someone I'm tempted to say either the 16 year odl from mall rats ((She'll be legal now)) or the main female in chasing Amy ((I can't remember her name right now.))
Review By [zabby] • Date [13 Dec 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "2 Stoners, 2 clerks, and an Angel...." from CPTSkip
Review:
Lol! Well, you certainly got the speech patterns of Kevin Smith's projects down. I also had to laugh at the Star Trek/Star Wars controversy. For some reason, Xander smoking jarred me. But I found your story to be amusing and I look forward to more. So Xander is to be the step-father of the next Messiah. That should prove interesting. Not to mention, Willow is going to freak! Lol!
Comments from author:
Yeah, honestly it kind of hard to write stuff like that down. And as I write more of them they'll probably get better. The Star Wars thing just made me think of Xander. I mean yeah he's a bit of a nerd but when you call Han Solo out you know he's going to get you. Calling out the Fett however he's luckily they didn't break him. Everyone seems to think that, and I think a character in a Kevin Smith movie has to smoke, I mean in the movies all the main heroes, and I use that word loosely have. I don't see why it's hard for people to believe Xander has taken to a minor form of stress relief.

I'm half tempted to have Willow not trust Xander on the whole next messiah thing. After all Willow was raised Jewish and in turn doesn't believe Jesus was the son of Christ. ((Correst me if I'm wrong please.)) But yeah, I think it will be interesting for Willow to block out anything Xander says in that regard.
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [13 Dec 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "2 Stoners, 2 clerks, and an Angel...." from Infinix
Review:
An interesting idea if it wasn't for the wildly out of character Xander. The smoking alone makes it seem as if it is an entirely different character or just a sad attempt at being "cool." The language, probably worse than anything even Randall would say sound completely retarded coming from Xander and just confirm that this character is in no way Xander Harris. Seriously this is a person who has a wide vocabulary of alternatives to cussing "great googly moogly" and "merciful Zeus" there is just no way you are going to convince anyone that Xander is in character
Comments from author:
Yeah, I know it's not the best. This is kind of the Xander in the Kevin Smith world. not the BtVS Xander. I see what your saying, but you also have to admit he'd probably have sworn at least some if not for the rating of the show.

Honestly I don't think Xander could hold his own in the "Kevin verse" without swearing. I mean the first time he said, "Great googly moogly" they'd all move away from him or break him down until he either left or broke them down. But he's just kind of broken right now, his best friends are betraying and leaving him, his family have betrayed him ((Except for Bob.)). So he's kind of lashing out, not hiding behind the "doofhus Xander" mask, he's going to swear and smoke, drink, and probably be a bit more risque when talking to women.

Of course he's still Xander so he won't be anywhere near Binky or even Randal levels, but he's going to have a little bit fiercer pervert side. Also hanging out with Jay might make him a bit worse.

So yeah, I see your comments and respect them, but I'm still going to have him be a bit more R rated than the Pg-13 television series. I'm sure you can understand, and I'd be interested to read a Kevin Smith/Xander cross where he kept his no swearing rules.
Review By [Infinix] • Date [13 Dec 09] • Not Rated
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