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Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from TheOdinson
Review:
Nice...i think this line summed it up for me...

"If I was any more ready we'd drown," she breathed in a fuck crazy voice."

That made me chuckle!

Great story...
Review By [TheOdinson] • Date [28 Jun 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from myrddyn
Review:
ok i loved the original series and this one is just as good. the only problem i had with the original was when it went into the x-files (the con artist Paige was hot though!) personally in this reworked story I'd like to see it go into Stargate SG1 instead. i even have an idea about how to do that.
either have Xander run into hathor and seduce her before she gets to the SGC or have a very sexy girl find one of those stasis jars with a tok ra in it and let Xander seduce her then she can teach Xander and his girls about Gould technology maybe even finding a small ship and they can go out into the galaxy (seducing even more beautiful women) and finding tech (I'd also have them accidentally find that planet from season 7's episode 5: revisions and trading a better power source
for the blueprints to the link (I'd have them alter it so that it can be used for interrogation so that it can download all an enemies knowledge and they can also set something up where only authorized people can get into it. then give and extra to the SGC that has a link to Xander's so that any updates the SGC get can download onto his own version covertly) I'd have them give the tech to the SGC covertly (probably by taking the ship down really close to the mountain uncloaked with Shields up and using the rings to place the equipment right in front of the mountain at night with a note or computer notebook with instructions and telling them its from a friend (aka not Gould) somewhere around season 1's episode cold Lazarus (plus that way the device can be used on the tollan really early) I'd also make it so that Xander programs it with a way to gauge the person who uses it's intentions (aka the nid can't get their grubby hands on it)
Review By [myrddyn] • Date [29 Sep 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from Fyrecat
Review:
Awesome, so far I'm loving the reboot! I just hate the waiting in between chapters!
If you need a proof reader, let me know!
Review By [Fyrecat] • Date [8 May 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from sunamee
Review:
The rewrite looks great.
Review By [sunamee] • Date [9 Jan 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from race
Review:
fantastic rewrite, and your updating when?
Review By [race] • Date [8 Jan 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from TheatricalBarrister
Review:
I've enjoyed many of your stories, including the original version of this. It is obvious that your writing has improved here, and I'm looking forward to seeing what improvements you'll make in this story.
Review By [TheatricalBarrister] • Date [20 Dec 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from sunamee
Review:
This revision looks great.
Review By [sunamee] • Date [19 Dec 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from KingHawke
Review:
Holy Crap. very good story/lemons. one of the most detailed I have read and by far one of the most sexy stories I've read. keep up the good work. I'm just curious as to what exactly Drusilla, Spike, and Angelus are going to do about Xander and what exactly Xander is. he's a human vampire! meaning: I have no clue what he can or cannot do yet.
Review By [KingHawke] • Date [16 Dec 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from race
Review:
Dude nice job I hope you update regularly and quickly!!!!!
Review By [race] • Date [15 Dec 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Current Donor)Sithspit
Review:
Very similar to the original with a few nuances of added flavor and spice. Looking forward to the rest.
Review By [(Current Donor)Sithspit] • Date [15 Dec 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Wolflady
Review:
Being killed is a turn for the better?
Review By [Wolflady] • Date [15 Dec 09] • Not Rated
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