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Review of chapter "Full Disclosure" from TouchoftheWind
Review:
Amazing i love their reactions to Alec!
Comments from author:
Who really can't resist the cuteness of Alec?

Glad you liked...
Review By [TouchoftheWind] • Date [19 Feb 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Full Disclosure" from agentrock
Review:
I loved this little story. The ending was very nice and rounded out the story quite well.
Comments from author:
Thank you!
Review By [agentrock] • Date [20 Jan 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Full Disclosure" from Takarameri
Review:
I love little Alec messing with Dawn and that Dean lied about pulling off the road.

I hope you have more inspiration for this 'Verse!
Comments from author:
Well, I did have some more inspiration for this 'verse and I just posted it a few minutes ago.

I want Alec to be the little version of the smartass he was on the show. When he was little, I would expect it not to be fully developed yet, but he always seemed a little more "mini-Dean" than Ben was in terms of attitude.
Review By [Takarameri] • Date [25 Dec 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Full Disclosure" from (Past Donor)SwimTeam
Review:
You know I loved it, especially that Alec wasn't cowering and told Dean at the end that he is not kid but Alec. You need to save my Ben soon though.
Rory:)
Comments from author:
Guess what?! Ellen and Jo found Ben! Yeah!
Review By [(Past Donor)SwimTeam] • Date [24 Dec 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Full Disclosure" from FaithWinchester
Review:
This stories are great! I just read both of these and I can't wait to see more! Little Deans, oh so very adorable!
Comments from author:
How could they not be adorable? Of course, I think Ben is probably more traumatized than Alec because he was witness to his sibling's dissection after Jack started having seizures. Will probably have an impact on him...
Review By [FaithWinchester] • Date [21 Dec 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Full Disclosure" from (Past Donor)Kiara
Review:
A very nice start. I like the interactions with little Alec and Dawn - will she be going on the road with the Winchesters to give hugs and reassurance and the such? Looking forward to seeing Dean interact with his clone, especially when he thaws out towards him.
Comments from author:
I think she'll have slipped her phone number into Alec's belongings, just in case he needs to talk, but she's staying in Cleveland. I didn't want to just "bring a character along" to call it a crossover with BtVS, and they really don't have room in the car for her. :)
Review By [(Past Donor)Kiara] • Date [19 Dec 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Full Disclosure" from dreameralways
Review:
This is great. I wonder how Dean would raise a brain-washed transgenic. Hopefully Dawn could get him to understand that the boys need a family not a drill sergeant. If not, Uncle Sam would probably help to provide the family aspect.
Comments from author:
Probably the same way he would raise a brain-washed Winchester, I guess. I think Dean watched the way his father raised them and will take the important parts of that, but change what he knew hurt them. He always seemed to be able to be the caretaker for Sam because he could step back and see that his father wasn't able to do that.
Review By [dreameralways] • Date [18 Dec 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Full Disclosure" from nicjphill
Review:
Loved it! Really would like to see the Dean/Sam/Alec reunion! Please write more!
Comments from author:
Glad you enjoyed...
Review By [nicjphill] • Date [18 Dec 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Full Disclosure" from betrayal
Review:
Hey am glad that you made a part two, hopefully you can make a third part. Why did the others find it best, for Dawn to inform Dean? Keep up the great work! and hopefully you'll start again soon.
Comments from author:
The simple reason that Dawn informed Dean was that someone had to and I hear her voice the best in my head. Plus, can you imagine Faith telling him? I think that probably would have come out ten kinds of wrong...

Just posted another story to the series, so I hope you enjoy!
Review By [betrayal] • Date [17 Dec 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Full Disclosure" from FireWolfe
Review:
This is a good as your first story.

More please.
Comments from author:
More has just been posted...story is called "Cold" :)
Review By [FireWolfe] • Date [17 Dec 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Full Disclosure" from FireWolfe
Review:
This is a good as your first story.

More please.
Review By [FireWolfe] • Date [17 Dec 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Full Disclosure" from Alexis
Review:
I really enjoyed that. young!Alec is adorable. Dean's reaction was perfect.

Any chance we'll see more of this?
Comments from author:
Signs point to yes...or that may be the story I just posted called "Cold." Hope you enjoy!
Review By [Alexis] • Date [17 Dec 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Full Disclosure" from Waverly
Review:
I love this series, and I cannot wait for the next installment! Thank you so much for writing it. Brilliant fun.
Comments from author:
Glad you are enjoying. I just posted another installment, 4th story in the series...
Review By [Waverly] • Date [16 Dec 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Full Disclosure" from banner
Review:
Your portrayal of Alec is wonderful. I love this younger, more trusting boy. Dean's lines to him were heartwarming - exactly the right language to communicate to a child-soldier.

“You know you are safe where you are, right?”
" Sit tight. We’re coming for you,”

Perfect.
Comments from author:
I figured that Manticore was still scrambling to catch the kids and they had the place in lockdown, but hadn't gotten to tossing the other units into psy-ops yet before the Slayers rescued them, so he wouldn't have had the extra psychological abuse yet.

Well, Dean was a bit of a child-soldier himself, so he would probably have the right vocabulary for it...
Review By [banner] • Date [16 Dec 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Full Disclosure" from kayron
Review:
I was going to write that this seemed like a great first chapter, and it would make a good story if it were continued. But, I read the author's note and it suggested that this story was part of a series. So does that mena that we will be hearing more about the additions to the Winchester family? Will there be updates on how they find Ben, and how Sam and Dean interact with the boys? Good start.
Comments from author:
Yes, as of this morning, there are four stories in the series. The 4th story is going to be multi-chapter story because I couldn't fit it all into one chapter! I believe your questions will be answered in the story, so I won't spoil it here...:)
Review By [kayron] • Date [16 Dec 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
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