ok, with a few more chapters to flesh out the idea this could be really interesting to read, while good for a start this is a bit on the short side. so i'll give you a good for the idea and composition and i'll wait and see before an overall rating.
Review By [shakeval] • Date [22 Dec 09] • Rating [6 out of 10]
This one isn't bad. My vote if you are going to continue a story would either be this one or Xander Named. They both have potential and are based on some of my favorite unusual supplements.
Review By [Outcaste] • Date [20 Dec 09] • Not Rated
I liked how you didn't replay the whole Helloween episode. But now I want to see the aftereffects. And what happened to Willow, Buffy, Cordy, and possibly Dawn? Or possibly even Joyce and/or Jenny Calender? I look forward to more of your story.
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [20 Dec 09] • Not Rated