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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Vilkath
Review:
Interesting start, though I think more focus should be given to the description and effects of things for those not well versed in DnD rules, lore and what not. I played the game for years and still look into the computer games now and then but I personally stopped around 2nd edition, I'm sure others never played at all and this story so far seems to assume their readers already know everything mentioned.

If this goes longer I think it's something to be expanded on.
Review By [Vilkath] • Date [21 Dec 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Bobboky
Review:
very good
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [21 Dec 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from IcemanII
Review:
Great start hope to see more.
Review By [IcemanII] • Date [20 Dec 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
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