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Review of chapter "If You Love Somebody, Set Them Free" from misdom
Review:
This is amazing. I'm super glad I took the time to read it.
Review By [misdom] • Date [18 Mar 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "If You Love Somebody, Set Them Free" from (Current Donor)hols
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I really enjoyed reading this and loved the ending thank you for writing such a great story that I have no doubt I will read over and over again
Review By [(Current Donor)hols] • Date [22 Mar 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "If You Love Somebody, Set Them Free" from (Current Donor)Katrina
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I'm always ambivalent about the Willow after Tara stories, as some days I go with she's gay, how could you, and some days I go with she's bi, of course you can.... But either way, I thought this was pretty well done and a captivating story in the end. Thank you for sharing it.
Review By [(Current Donor)Katrina] • Date [31 May 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "If You Love Somebody, Set Them Free" from (Current Donor)Listener
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A good story, made better because Buffy didn't come riding in to save the day as so often happens. I do think the ending wrapped up a bit too fast -- not enough Willow -- and I also think she got over Tara WAY too quickly (W/T is my OTP). Still, I think you did a good job with this one.
Review By [(Current Donor)Listener] • Date [25 Mar 12] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "If You Love Somebody, Set Them Free" from Dragonelf
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I have just finished reading this story and I think you have done a good job with it.

PS. I don't know if you are aware of it but the banner in the beginning of the first chapter of this story has been replaced by a Stop SOPA image.

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Review By [Dragonelf] • Date [20 Feb 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "If You Love Somebody, Set Them Free" from bliss
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Awwww...it's over. Bummer. Awesome story, brilliant plot, beautifully written.

I suggest a sequel-keep folks like me entertained....you know...the ones who openly admit they have no life.

I do like how you ended it with Spike and Angel. Though they did not really have your kind of brotherly relationship in the series, I do prefer it. Don't get me wrong, I did like their relationship in the series; it kept things interesting. However, I do like this version of it much better.

I do think a sequel, if you have not written one, would be perfect.

Well, I'm off. Thanks so much for sharing your talent with us. I look forward to reading more of your work.

"“Right, I have that problem all the time. I mean just last week, the mermaids of the Mississippi tried to worship and adore me when all I wanted was a tuna sandwich.”"--*giggle*

Now I'm not gonna be able to look at a can of Chicken of the Sea again without this running through my head.

*soft laugh*
Review By [bliss] • Date [4 Oct 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Lady Delight" from bliss
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Okay, I am pausing here just to say it's about damn time!! Geez, the tension between these two has been killing me!!

Okay...movin' on.
Review By [bliss] • Date [4 Oct 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A Sermon" from bliss
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I am lovin' this!! Tell me, are you a published author, and if so, please tell me where I can find your work. If not, by all means, get your name out there. You have talent!! Your story rivals those of Ms. Hamilton and I should know, I am an avid reader of her work. I have spotted a couple typos, but not many and your sentence structure is perfect. You portray the characters of A.B., BtVS, and Angel beautifully, especially the banter between Angel and Spike. I love how you were able to have both worlds flow together, that seems difficult to do. I also adore how how you made fish Spike's animal to call. I still have to giggle about that. Good call on making Angel's animals rats. That makes sense from his previous encounter with them. One of my favorite chapters so far is A Sermon. I had to chuckle the entire way through. Your story is brilliant, and I cannot wait to finish. I just had to leave a comment here...mainly because I do believe I have gone cross-eyed from reading the computer screen for over five hours now. That plays havoc on one's eyesight, you know. *grin*

A few of my favorite quotes....

"“Right, I have that problem all the time. I mean just last week, the mermaids of the Mississippi tried to worship and adore me when all I wanted was a tuna sandwich.”" *giggle* Best line ever!!

"He’d had come to the end of his list, but felt the need to lighten the mood, so Spike continued with “Stipulation seven. You are not allowed to wear the color black for the duration of your stay.”
“You can’t be serious!”
“It completely clashes with his décor! I told you he was French.”
“Spike, Jean-Claude would never forbid me from wearing black. That’s ridiculous!”
“Stipulation eight, you are not allowed to look any prettier than the Master of St. Louis. Well, I guess as long as you leave your hair gel at home that won’t be a problem. Stipulation nine, you must refer to the Master as ‘his ponciness’ or ‘the almighty fruit’.”
“Spike…” Angel’s growl was low in his throat.
“Oh for Christ’s sake! I’m just playing with you.” Spike rolled over on the bed laughing. “You can bring as much hair gel as you want.”
“I knew that.” Angel said, a bit put off by Spike antics."--I can actually hear this conversation in my head.

I'm tellin' you, get published. I swear I will buy every copy of anything you write and keep it on my shelf forever!! *crosses her heart*
Review By [bliss] • Date [4 Oct 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Lithium Sunset" from DarthLoki
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"He had given up standing by the carousel and brooding about four minutes ago, and was now sitting in one of the plastic chairs brooding. "

That just cracked me up, and I kept laughing at his depressed inner monologue about how he sucked as a master, etc.
Review By [DarthLoki] • Date [27 Feb 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "If You Love Somebody, Set Them Free" from Obsidian
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BRAVO! You done this story very well. Very well written.

Thank you.
Review By [Obsidian] • Date [8 Jul 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "If You Love Somebody, Set Them Free" from RockyWilliams
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Great story, I enjoyed it a lot. I liked this Angel and Spike in some ways better than the canon ones from the Angel series actually.
Review By [RockyWilliams] • Date [18 May 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "If You Love Somebody, Set Them Free" from Red
Review:
I enjoyed reading this story
Review By [Red] • Date [30 Apr 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "If You Love Somebody, Set Them Free" from luvsanime
Review:
I have read this story six or seven times now and I must say... bravo. This story is so amazing that I am willing to stay up untill all hours of the night reading it!
Comments from author:
Aww, how sweet. Thanks! I'm sorry to be contributing to insomnia, but I'm glad you liked the story.
Review By [luvsanime] • Date [14 Feb 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "If You Love Somebody, Set Them Free" from Kirallie
Review:
Very good work!!! Great story!! Feel kinda sorry for Asher, both women he loves are claimed by others. Glad they freed Oz.
Review By [Kirallie] • Date [13 Aug 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "If You Love Somebody, Set Them Free" from kcjadesolo
Review:
totally cool, loved it.
Review By [kcjadesolo] • Date [19 May 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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