A cracking good story with an impressive amount of detail into Xander and Jack's abilities as well as the Gou'ald technology.

Thanks for the review. I keep wanting to continue, sadly real life keeps getting in the way. I have about 8 hours a week when I'm not working on something. Which is mostly filled with reading other people's amazing work.

Nice story! I'm impressed.

Pretty cool. I was looking for a prototype story and this was pretty cool.

The only reason you don't get a ten is because nobody is perfect!!! I love the story and hope that you keep working on it. Are you planning on tieing in any Armageddon? Any transformers? or Any predator? Its just fun and you put so much technical information it. It must take you quite a bit of time and research to lay the descriptions out like you do. I thoroughly enjoy your writting and hope you keep at this one.

I'm always working on it. Even when I'm in class or working in the lab. I've actually got several folders on my computer filled with megabytes of research. I've even calculated weapons & shield strengths to make sure everything roughly works out. Sadly since my last update I've had three exam periods. Of which one is still going on. When it wasn't an exam period I had 12 hour class days, which gave me about 4 hours time to get everything else done that I had to do that day. But I promise that by 10 February when my exams are done I will post the next chapter.

There will be parts of Armageddon in the story. (there was the case in Stargate SG-1 when Anubis sent an asteroid towards earth. I'm thinking of something similar only adapted to this story.)
As for transformers and predator, I haven't even considered them but might bring an (in universe) original version of both races.

Thank you for the review.

Jack created an AI? WOW and nice upgrades to the SGC.
The name for the AI sounds good.

Glad you like it. Technically he just copied it from the information Xander shared with him. I'm close to finishing the next chapter. Sadly I have twelve hour school-days (travel time included) eating away at my time.

dude you really need to update this!

I'm working on it. I've got a dozen A4 pages so far but I want to finish this part before posting. Glad you like the story.

hmm I wonder what Mayboune will come up with now......

Next chapter. Many problems ahead. Glad you like it and thank you for the review.

♫♥I look forward to reading what happens next in your story♥♪

Working on it. Won't be long. Glad you like it.

Great chapter, hopes for more, bye

Glad you like it. Thanks for the review.

dude i really love this story! i do hope you'll update it soon! and i am looking forward to some of the things that will be coming up!

Glad you like it. I'm working on the next chapter, but I also have exams so it might be a couple of weeks. Thanks for the review.

I like the name Guardian. It suits since 'he' literally 'guards' all of the SGC.

Glad you like it. Its a similar way I thought about it. Thanks for the review.

good choices. More please!

Glad you like it. I'm working on it.

What about Defender for the AI's name?

An interesting idea. I just keep seeing Woody Harrelson in his Defendor role.

I love this story and I want you to post more and soon! I want to read more Xander in the next chapter if you please.

Glad you like it. Yes, next chapter will centre around Xander again.

A great intelligent Jack.

We've always know that he acts dumber than he is. Now that he's one of the few people on earth that knows this stuff he's forced to explain it, event hough he'd prefer to play the idiot. Something I wanted to accentuate with the plasma explanation.
Glad you like it.