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Review of chapter "Chapter 16" from Poseidon
Review:
Hi!
Please, please update someday soon! I really like how the sgc and the fight against the demons are shaping up and would really like to see how it continues, especially what happens without Kendras death! I mean I know through Xanders "reading" of the research material it gets easier but still there are things he doesn't know! I would like to know if Xander can purposefully infect someone, so that they can continue as virus form or not?
Two things though: First, I hope Maybourne wasn't able to get the sample of the Virus Frasier was working on, because if he did and it still wasn't detected there would have to be a real uproar and a big round of investigations!
Second, I would have liked Xander having contact with Ashley Parker in Prosperity, after all Scarlett Johansson!:D
Thanks for writing and again I hope you update and that soon!;)
Review By [Poseidon] • Date [7 Oct 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 16" from eriktheviking
Review:
Still a great (re)read.
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [10 Jun 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 16" from Edman
Review:
Awesome story
Please continue.
Review By [Edman] • Date [13 Apr 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 16" from eriktheviking
Review:
A cracking good story with an impressive amount of detail into Xander and Jack's abilities as well as the Gou'ald technology.
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review. I keep wanting to continue, sadly real life keeps getting in the way. I have about 8 hours a week when I'm not working on something. Which is mostly filled with reading other people's amazing work.
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [5 Mar 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 16" from Dmitri
Review:
Nice story! I'm impressed.
Review By [Dmitri] • Date [30 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 16" from Rubel
Review:
Pretty cool. I was looking for a prototype story and this was pretty cool.
Review By [Rubel] • Date [30 Apr 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 16" from AngryBunnyInk
Review:
The only reason you don't get a ten is because nobody is perfect!!! I love the story and hope that you keep working on it. Are you planning on tieing in any Armageddon? Any transformers? or Any predator? Its just fun and you put so much technical information it. It must take you quite a bit of time and research to lay the descriptions out like you do. I thoroughly enjoy your writting and hope you keep at this one.
Comments from author:
I'm always working on it. Even when I'm in class or working in the lab. I've actually got several folders on my computer filled with megabytes of research. I've even calculated weapons & shield strengths to make sure everything roughly works out. Sadly since my last update I've had three exam periods. Of which one is still going on. When it wasn't an exam period I had 12 hour class days, which gave me about 4 hours time to get everything else done that I had to do that day. But I promise that by 10 February when my exams are done I will post the next chapter.

There will be parts of Armageddon in the story. (there was the case in Stargate SG-1 when Anubis sent an asteroid towards earth. I'm thinking of something similar only adapted to this story.)
As for transformers and predator, I haven't even considered them but might bring an (in universe) original version of both races.

Thank you for the review.
Review By [AngryBunnyInk] • Date [7 Jan 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 16" from (Recent Donor)Hawklan
Review:
Jack created an AI? WOW and nice upgrades to the SGC.
The name for the AI sounds good.
Comments from author:
Glad you like it. Technically he just copied it from the information Xander shared with him. I'm close to finishing the next chapter. Sadly I have twelve hour school-days (travel time included) eating away at my time.
Review By [(Recent Donor)Hawklan] • Date [30 Nov 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 16" from myrddyn
Review:
dude you really need to update this!
Comments from author:
I'm working on it. I've got a dozen A4 pages so far but I want to finish this part before posting. Glad you like the story.
Review By [myrddyn] • Date [28 Sep 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 15" from (Recent Donor)Hawklan
Review:
hmm I wonder what Mayboune will come up with now......
Comments from author:
Next chapter. Many problems ahead. Glad you like it and thank you for the review.
Review By [(Recent Donor)Hawklan] • Date [25 Jul 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 16" from Hanzo
Review:
♫♥I look forward to reading what happens next in your story♥♪
Comments from author:
Working on it. Won't be long. Glad you like it.
Review By [Hanzo] • Date [22 Jul 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 16" from gaulty
Review:
Great chapter, hopes for more, bye
Comments from author:
Glad you like it. Thanks for the review.
Review By [gaulty] • Date [4 Jun 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 16" from myrddyn
Review:
dude i really love this story! i do hope you'll update it soon! and i am looking forward to some of the things that will be coming up!
Comments from author:
Glad you like it. I'm working on the next chapter, but I also have exams so it might be a couple of weeks. Thanks for the review.
Review By [myrddyn] • Date [4 Jun 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 16" from lilsis
Review:
I like the name Guardian. It suits since 'he' literally 'guards' all of the SGC.
Comments from author:
Glad you like it. Its a similar way I thought about it. Thanks for the review.
Review By [lilsis] • Date [30 May 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 16" from Genuka
Review:
good choices. More please!
Comments from author:
Glad you like it. I'm working on it.
Review By [Genuka] • Date [24 May 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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