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Review of chapter "A vampire hunting we will go....1" from Kindleflame
Review:
Are you still alive?
Comments from author:
Yes, sort of. I'm in desperate need of a beta before I can post anything. No beta/proof reader, the story ends up in quarantine....
Review By [Kindleflame] • Date [18 Mar 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A vampire hunting we will go....1" from Hanzo
Review:
♫♥I look forward to reading what happens next in your story♥♪
Review By [Hanzo] • Date [26 Jul 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "A vampire hunting we will go....1" from msdarque
Review:
Quite an intriguing and unique idea.. I really loved reading it! :D
Congrats and kudos!
Review By [msdarque] • Date [8 Jun 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "A vampire hunting we will go....1" from ConDaMon
Review:
Great story! in future updates a little more back story would be cool. please update soon :)
Review By [ConDaMon] • Date [24 May 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A vampire hunting we will go....1" from purrfus
Review:
Overall is good. The little tidbits really add a lot - blessed bath oil beads, who'd a thunk it.
Review By [purrfus] • Date [16 May 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A vampire hunting we will go....1" from WolfWriter
Review:
After reading this story a couple of times, I have to say that it is excellent.

However, you're overdoing the accent a bit much. It comes across as trying too hard on the part of either Xander or Remy.

Nice bit about the bath beads. That's one thing I have never even seen in other vampire fics. Usually it's a SuperSoaker or something similar.

How about showing Buffy's reaction to Xander's new abilities? Would she freak and demand that Giles 'fix' him? Or would she freak and then calm down?

What about Willow? How frenzied would the Willowbabble get?
Comments from author:
Thanks, and the accent is a bit hard to press down. I personally think Remy may have "Hammed" up his accent a bit since being a thief is all about being able to get into a place and out of a place with minimal attention. It's also said that he can speak many languages and I assume that means he doesn't have too much of an issue with said accent. So I kind of have Xander have it a bit more heavily because he truly has it, he knows other languages but knowing how to say somethign and saying it are different. Thus why he speaks Cajun because after the possession he IS Cajun ((Not saying Remy wasn't, but one can be trained to not have an accent.)). He can't hide his voice at a though and that shows in a bit more heavy accent.

I've always wondered why no ones used bathe beads, their are lots of cases of "holy oil" I mean the Jewish Faith has a holiday solely devoted to it. Also oil is a much more effective weapon since in ancient times they'd super heat oil and pour it on enemies, it stays hotter longer, it burns deeper and it's impossible to get off quickly. However they always use holy water, and I never understood why.

And I probably will the next chapter when I get around to writing it will probably be a bit of a flash back chapter to fill in a few details. So I might very well add this, thanks for the idea and the review.
Review By [WolfWriter] • Date [8 Jan 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A vampire hunting we will go....1" from LordSia
Review:
Cool, too chaotic and far too short, you could use a better flow and fill out the chapters more. As a series of one-shot ficlets, it works though; funny, loosely connected with a red thread but not so much it is painful. Cool use of a less popular mutant, too.
Comments from author:
I'm not done, and I'm planning to do more each chapter I'm kind of testing the waters with thing one was in character ability, two was the cajun, three was combat, I'll start posting longer chapters now that I have it better worked out and know that I can pull it off.
Review By [LordSia] • Date [7 Jan 10] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "A vampire hunting we will go....1" from annararen
Review:
Wicked :)

I wonder.. where does Gambit ends, and where does Xander begin?

Thanks for writing!
Comments from author:
Thanks, I don't know if even I know the answer to that question, and thanks for the review.
Review By [annararen] • Date [4 Jan 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A vampire hunting we will go....1" from slmncpm
Review:
*laughs* oh to be causing those kind of headaches. wooHOOO
Comments from author:
Ah babe I'm sure you've caused a few of those kind in your time ((Winks lecherously))
Review By [slmncpm] • Date [29 Dec 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A vampire hunting we will go....1" from RafMereC
Review:
Great story idea.
Looking good so far.
Raf.
Comments from author:
Thanks, next chapter I'm probably going to do a bit more of a flash back I feel like the Mayor thing got a bit shafted since it was one of Xander's major fights I want to show it.
Review By [RafMereC] • Date [29 Dec 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A vampire hunting we will go....1" from Sandi
Review:
This is so cool. I love this idea. It cannot be all sweetness and light. There's a reason they are traveling. Something to do with the as yet unmentioned Scoobies? Please Sir May we have another?
Review By [Sandi] • Date [29 Dec 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "A vampire hunting we will go....1" from JediKnight
Review:
Like the work so far, hoping for more soon.

-Any chance of showing what happened with Xander during halloween?
Comments from author:
You probably will, and I'm reluctant to show that, just because A REALLY Gambit Xander would use alot more Cajun and B the major reason is because that's been done so well by SO many authors. I may do it though if a few more people want to see it.

If I do that, I'll probably post more of the Mayor battle as well, I think it got kind of shafted with the paragraph I gave it.
Review By [JediKnight] • Date [29 Dec 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "A vampire hunting we will go....1" from DarkFaerieYumi
Review:
YAY! This is great. I absolutely adore this fic. I love the cajun insertion and Faith and all of it. I really look forward to the next chapter.
Comments from author:
Thanks alot, I enjoy writing it even if it is a bit of a pain to do the cajun stuff the reviewer response makes it worth it.
Review By [DarkFaerieYumi] • Date [29 Dec 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The best part of a road trip ((1))" from tohonomike
Review:
Nice story so far.
Comments from author:
Heh heh yeah someone said that, I need to change it. Thanks for the info though and the review.
Review By [tohonomike] • Date [27 Dec 09] • Rating [6 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The best part of a road trip ((1))" from rinv
Review:
Pretty good story, but there is one mistake I thought I'd let you know about. Alaska can be driven to. I've done it and it was one hell of a road trip/.
Comments from author:
Ah dangit, earlier I though Anartica and Hawii were the fifty first and fifty second state, then it turned out it was Alaska not Anartica, then it turns out you can drive to Alaska.

I should have done a bit more research before I used the line, ah well thanks for the info, and the review, I'll fix it soon.
Review By [rinv] • Date [27 Dec 09] • Not Rated
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