Review of chapter "And I chamber another round...." from
PiterioReview:
That was nice but i would like to see what comes next of it. Still i liked it very much.
Review By [
Piterio] • Date [26 Oct 12] • Rating [7 out of 10]
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JoeHundredaireReview:
It reads like something you wrote on Red Bull. It perhaps has the potential to be an interesting story (even just as a one-shot) but is far too rushed at present.
Review By [
JoeHundredaire] • Date [13 Feb 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "And I chamber another round...." from
BobbokyReview:
good
Comments from author:
Thanks and thanks for the review.
Review By [
Bobboky] • Date [25 Dec 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "And I chamber another round...." from
TDKReview:
This could have potential but it needs work. A M60 is not a Saw that is a M243 they are not 50. caliber
Comments from author:
Yeah it was a one shot. I kept seeing flashes of the battle and just wrote it as I saw it. If I decide to add more I'll fi the problem.
Review By [
TDK] • Date [25 Dec 09] • Rating [5 out of 10]
