Review of chapter "Taken By Force" from SwimmieTeam
Review:
Oh dear. Buffy as a vamp. I've thought of that myself, but I heard somewhere they there are magicks that stop that from happening. I liked it like always and I encourage you to write more of this.
Comments from author:
Thanks Luckie! I really appreciate you reading all my stories :) Someday I would love to write more and explore the Vamp!Buffy world. Would she kill her friends or still protect and love them, like Spike? Or would she turn them? Would she turn super evil or would she still kill evil things because its so part of who she was? All are interesting questions...
Review By [SwimmieTeam] • Date [22 Jul 10] • Not Rated
Blech, just blech. Evil Buffy is not interesting when combined with her woobie rapist. Save this by having Vamp Buffy immediately stake St. Cheekbones.
Comments from author:
I dunno. Might be interesting to see where Evil Buffy would go with this.
Of course, I'm not really sure. Hence, why I made this a one-shot.
Review By [cryyhavoc] • Date [27 Dec 09] • Rating [1 out of 10]
As far as Spike goes, -- “Bloody right I have. So you’ll give me what I want. Make me what I was, so Buffy can get what she deserves.” Hmm, from his dialogue, I think there's a possibility he didn't know his soul was going to be the prize ahead of time anyway...
Comments from author:
Thanks :)
I like to think it was pretty ambiguous.
Review By [Shieldage] • Date [27 Dec 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Interesting setup. But with both witches still around, wouldn't they just resoul Buffy? But if they couldn't, I'll bet Spike would fight Vamp Buffy to save Dawn from her evil clutches. I hope you continue this story as there are so many ways your story could go from here.
Comments from author:
Hey CPTSkip, thanks for reading! I wrote this as a possible one-shot just to explore the idea and get the plot bunny out of my head. There are a lot of possibilities with an evil Buffy but I agree that there is that pesky/good (depending on who you're rooting for) gypsy spell... Although that actually always made me wonder why Spike just didn't do that same spell instead of the dramatic demon fights (I know, I know, that made for a much better story).
I will certainly be pondering on this story... :)
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [25 Dec 09] • Not Rated
I was entirely impressed with this story and I truly hope you decide to continue it. There are a few stories out there where Spike turns Buffy, however, the foundation of them is rarely this solid. I eagerly await a continuation.
Comments from author:
Thank you very much for your kind words keliose. I have yet to read a story where Spike turns Buffy and I'll probably refrain until I decide where this story may go.
I wrote this as a possible one-shot but it has so many possibilities I would like to continue it. We'll have to see what my muse thinks though... She has a mind of her own ;)
Review By [keliose] • Date [25 Dec 09] • Not Rated