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An Alteran in Sunnydale: Prologue

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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from agnar
Review:
Overall not bad but I gotta say the ending was bad, didn't work. Merlin put Buffy to sleep, so there'd be no panic and run away bit. Not to mention Merlin would have just tossed Spike away and dusted him like the minions.

It just feels like you took the easy way out, going back to canon rather than taking a real chance and changing things. Either keeping Buffy at home or actually dusting Spike. It gets boring to read so many fics that don't take chances like killing off those annoying twats Angel and Spike when it'd be the easiest/best solution.

Oh well, hope the sequel does more with what you began.
Review By [agnar] • Date [6 Mar 14] • Rating [6 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Recent Donor)nerfherder
Review:
Promising! Let's see what developes?!?
Review By [(Recent Donor)nerfherder] • Date [30 Mar 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Current Donor)dogbertcarroll
Review:
Started off good, but the ending made no sense. Why would they have left the house if Merlin kept Buffy asleep so you didn't run off as in canon?
Review By [(Current Donor)dogbertcarroll] • Date [9 Aug 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Recent Donor)Hawklan
Review:
nice start and good you didn't replay the whole Halloween gig *g*
Review By [(Recent Donor)Hawklan] • Date [22 Feb 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Current Donor)dogbertcarroll
Review:
There was no reason for Merlin to let Spike live, he would have set him on fire with the others.
Review By [(Current Donor)dogbertcarroll] • Date [10 Jan 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from wraithrune
Review:
seems interesting :D
Review By [wraithrune] • Date [27 Dec 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from DKoepp
Review:
Great Story, I do hope you continue this one into a series or at least another story.
Review By [DKoepp] • Date [27 Dec 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from JediKnight
Review:
Vry interesting stoy, will there be a sequel?
Review By [JediKnight] • Date [27 Dec 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from enderverse
Review:
Its spelled Myrddin in Stargate, nobody spells it murddin. Otherwise great story, hope you continue it.
Comments from author:
Umm...Oops?
Review By [enderverse] • Date [27 Dec 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from kayron
Review:
The title of this story is 'An Alteran in Sunnydale: Prologue'. Since this is called a prologue, does that mean that there will be more to the story, or is this the end. Because Daniel Jackson would just about lose that brilliant mind to be able to talk to someone who holds Merlin's conciousness. The rest of SG1 would be flipping happy to have a strong ally against the ORI.
Review By [kayron] • Date [27 Dec 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Morgomir
Review:
Great story. Great start. Keep up the good work.
Review By [Morgomir] • Date [26 Dec 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from purrfus
Review:
Nice mix of original and canon. Looking forward to the next installment.
Review By [purrfus] • Date [26 Dec 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from darthridian
Review:
great start would love to see more of this.
Review By [darthridian] • Date [26 Dec 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from maddog
Review:
Nice start, please continue
Review By [maddog] • Date [26 Dec 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Bluesnowman
Review:
i like
Review By [Bluesnowman] • Date [26 Dec 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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