Review of chapter "Chapter One" from leelaa
It was a fine read, but could you please add some detail to the summery maybe? As a sort of take-off point into the story, so one has some idea who's who when at the start. Right now, I'm appreciative of the fic, but also very confused.
Comments from author:
Alright, I'll be sure to do that. I didn't want to give anything away in the summary as a spoiler, but I'll add some details about American Beauty, just to clear things up. Again, thank you so much for reading and reviewing, as always.
I see the problem: someone keeps changing the labeling to The Sixth Sense. It is not a Sixth Sense story, though it mentions the movie because in my story, Ricky has seen it. It is an American Beauty story, which is why I have it (when I label it) written as a 'Drama-Other'. No wonder you were confused!
Review By [leelaa
] • Date [17 Apr 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]