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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from darkk
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more plz!!
Review By [darkk] • Date [17 Jan 14] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Bill
Review:
Great start! Gave me a giggle.
Review By [Bill] • Date [2 Jul 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Recent Donor)nerfherder
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A lot of fun and don't think I didn't notice the word "prima" mister! X is gonna get another scary girlfriend! Lookin forward to it!
Review By [(Recent Donor)nerfherder] • Date [28 Mar 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from myrddyn
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dude you seriously need to update this!
Review By [myrddyn] • Date [26 Apr 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from animesam
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hi great story but you ended the threat already. the big long range commutator was at Glastonbury Tor. no commutator no Ori . and he did not have to go back in time to get the zpm like power source. it is behind the wall in the Abydos pyramid. i still read anything you write this is a great read.
Review By [animesam] • Date [19 Dec 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from myrddyn
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dude why haven't you updated this kick ass story in so long? you really need to update soon!
(btw i do hope the ancient city in this story will include all the needed manufacturing capabilities!
also may i suggest borrowing some ideas from BabyBoy349's story last of the ancients
and maybe include universal travel so that you can include other technologies from different series
for example if you use star trek and borrow the idea from the next generation you could have
xander use energy to matter technology (replicators lol) to build a dyson sphere which could collect
the energy from a sun and use that energy to build ships and technology using a copy of the ancient database you could also have him steal plans from hostile lifeforms from other tv shows
for example the plans for the t-100's from terminator or at least the compact nuclear fusion cells
to help earth build its own energy weapons quicker or the geodisic fold drive from battlestar galactica plus the design for the basestars and some of the other ships (i never liked how after the promethius which was un ugly ship by the way was destroyed that they only built 304's which were ridiculously underpowered, small and built for to many roles. they should have made dedicated ships like the navy does for example a carrier class a destroyer class a shuttle
a cargo class and maybe even a battleship class. also i'd also nick the designs for the ns5's from i robot and slightly change their programing so they can't go nuts maybe add a 4th or 5th law instead of just the 3 laws of robotics) well good luck and please update soon!
Review By [myrddyn] • Date [16 Jul 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from djhardim
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Good, hope you finish this. I hope you will reconsider Xander's assault of Snyder. I think it would have been smarter if he had told him that he needed his help. Something had come up and he needed to leave high school in the next week or two. He wanted to take his GED exams.
Review By [djhardim] • Date [16 May 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from myrddyn
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ok you really really need to update this awesome fic! the only bad part i've seen so far is that you didn't put in a lemon with the twins!!! i do hope that xander rips of ra's ship too! (just imagine what sort of help that would give earth in building the prometheus early?
Review By [myrddyn] • Date [5 May 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from wraithrune
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Incredible :) hope you will continue this!
Review By [wraithrune] • Date [12 Feb 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from SlythaArget
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Very good portrayal of xander
Review By [SlythaArget] • Date [6 Dec 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from JediKnight
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Very interesting job on this story so far, you do have a few type-o's though. I hope you will be adding more soon.
Review By [JediKnight] • Date [14 Nov 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Narf
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cool keep up the good work thanks and bye
Review By [Narf] • Date [2 Nov 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Past Donor)ridert
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Just read this one for what I think is the third or maybe fourth time and was wishing very strongly to see it continued hope you can find the muse somehow.
Review By [(Past Donor)ridert] • Date [11 Sep 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from myrddyn
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ok i love your prologue!!! (will xander be helping the Asgard with their replicator problem?)
where will xander be parking his new city ship? (will he get a full compliment of zpms and a few ancients and durandons too? after all as long as some stay behind to close project arcturas then history won't be affected to much. personally i would have xander and a few ancients park the city ship in the future on mars then terraform mars to be habitable.)
Review By [myrddyn] • Date [1 Sep 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Shadestar
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Please keep up the good work and please up-date
Review By [Shadestar] • Date [21 Jun 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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