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A Summer of Demons, Myths, and Sunshine

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Review of chapter "Chapter 16: Rituals, Guilt, and A Visitor" from WillowPiper
Review:
Awesome story ... I don't normally read stories that haven't been updated in years but I was bloody well bored! Please tell me you stopped writing this story for some noble reason and will be getting back to it soon!!!
Review By [WillowPiper] • Date [12 Nov 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 5: Training Time" from DragonBard
Review:
She's a bit too free with the whole 'Key' thing, but otherwise okay.
Review By [DragonBard] • Date [3 Jan 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 15: Unspoken Fears" from Hanzo
Review:
‚ô•captivating‚ô•
Comments from author:
Thank you so much for the rating and the review. I'm thrilled you like the story so much.
Review By [Hanzo] • Date [14 Sep 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 15: Unspoken Fears" from Cmiller
Review:
That was interesting and I can't wait for more.
Comments from author:
I'm glad you liked it. I planning on having another chapter up by this weekend.
Review By [Cmiller] • Date [6 Sep 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 13: Monstrous Phantoms" from liability
Review:
just read through this from the beginning! Like it and am looking forward to more.
Comments from author:
Thank you. I'm thrilled you like it. More will (hopefully) be coming soon.
Review By [liability] • Date [5 May 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 13: Monstrous Phantoms" from nightshadowlife
Review:
woah, okay awesome chapter but I'm lost lol I'm going to have to go back and re-read it!
Comments from author:
I'm glad you liked it. Sorry, sorry, sorry that I confused you. I really hope that you can understand it again. :) And just let me tell you, every time I see you've reviewed my story, it makes me feel wonderful. Thank you so, so, so much for reviewing almost every chapter I write. It means a lot to me.
Review By [nightshadowlife] • Date [18 Apr 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 12: Results, Revelations" from nightshadowlife
Review:
woah can't wait to see how that plays out!!!!
Review By [nightshadowlife] • Date [4 Apr 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 11: Waves and Broken Bonds" from nightshadowlife
Review:
awww yay! LOL i'm so happy you got em talking again!!!!
Review By [nightshadowlife] • Date [19 Mar 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 10: Disgusting Demons" from nightshadowlife
Review:
awesome chapter!
Review By [nightshadowlife] • Date [28 Feb 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 9: What is Friendship?" from (Recent Donor)DeacBlue
Review:
I like the idea of the story, even though you tear up Buffyverse canon a bit much for my liking without a stated reason to build it. The pacing isn't bad, and you did very good work with the reactions in the Ron-Hermione dust-up.

That being said, the characterization needs work. Everyone seems to know everyone before they meet, and when they do introduce themselves, it's never the way that you expect the characters to. Also, you paint Spike as an unbelievable ninny with his talk about tweed. That's Buffy's shtick, not his. And why isn't Cordy bitching about her visions? Come to think of it, why didn't she get one when she was hit with the curse, since you foreshadowed Voldy's interference?

All in all, not bad though definitely room for improvement.

Separately, you know you could very well be painting Ron as gay, with his reactions here. It had me confused for a moment, thinking that he was basically saying, "you bitch!" to Harry.
Comments from author:
Thank you for your suggestions. I definitely try to make this better.
Review By [(Recent Donor)DeacBlue] • Date [14 Feb 10] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 9: What is Friendship?" from nightshadowlife
Review:
awesome chapter!!!
Review By [nightshadowlife] • Date [14 Feb 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 8: Broken Hearts" from nightshadowlife
Review:
awesome chapter!!! Lol I love the scene with Hermoine and Cordelia
Review By [nightshadowlife] • Date [11 Feb 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 8: Broken Hearts" from SassyFrass
Review:
Interesting update. So is Ron really not in love with Hermione? Certainly didn't look like it.
Review By [SassyFrass] • Date [8 Feb 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 7: Everything's pink in girl world" from nightshadowlife
Review:
I love the chapter! I liked Cordelia being nice to someone! Awesome!
Review By [nightshadowlife] • Date [28 Jan 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 7: Everything's pink in girl world" from (Recent Donor)CaptainBoulanger
Review:
Well, if she'd going to have Dumbledore try to fix Spike up with a sunlight shield, maybe he should call her Sunshine or something.
Review By [(Recent Donor)CaptainBoulanger] • Date [28 Jan 10] • Not Rated
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