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SulienReview:
Thank you for sharing this, I greatly enjoyed it and desperately hope you decide to write more of Ivy and Illyria some day! The bit at the end about Illyria's hair being the color of one of Ivy's crayons made me grin from ear to ear and that last little thought of Illyria's to visit Chicago made me laugh out loud at the mere thought of Illyria coming into contact with Harry and, by extension, Bob, whom Illyria may already know. After all, Bob is a rather ancient and powerful spirit of Air...
Comments from author:
I did write this with the idea in mind of Illyria coming across Harry sooner or later. =) I hadn't thought of the Bob angle; but that does have possibilities!
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Sulien] • Date [3 Jul 10] • Not Rated
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ElleriaReview:
Love this.
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Elleria] • Date [1 Jul 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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toscaReview:
Nice. I really liked this snapshot.
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tosca] • Date [31 Dec 09] • Not Rated
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BobbokyReview:
cool
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Bobboky] • Date [30 Dec 09] • Not Rated
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TonyTheJewReview:
When I first read the line "I know who you are," it made me think of Alma from FEAR, And I would have love to see Illyria talk to her. I've never read the The Dresden Files, But this looks ok.
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TonyTheJew] • Date [30 Dec 09] • Not Rated
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ShyBobReview:
Nice Illyria characterization. Good backstory tie-in, as well, especially for a short piece.
M.L.I.B.
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ShyBob] • Date [30 Dec 09] • Not Rated
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matthewReview:
Ilyria and the Archive. Interesting...
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matthew] • Date [29 Dec 09] • Not Rated
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AvaReview:
Oh, now that was just shiny. I love the use of minor characters and I knew this one! I really should start up the Dresden series again.
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Ava] • Date [29 Dec 09] • Not Rated
