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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Current Donor)Sulien
Review:
Thank you for sharing this, I greatly enjoyed it and desperately hope you decide to write more of Ivy and Illyria some day! The bit at the end about Illyria's hair being the color of one of Ivy's crayons made me grin from ear to ear and that last little thought of Illyria's to visit Chicago made me laugh out loud at the mere thought of Illyria coming into contact with Harry and, by extension, Bob, whom Illyria may already know. After all, Bob is a rather ancient and powerful spirit of Air...
Comments from author:
I did write this with the idea in mind of Illyria coming across Harry sooner or later. =) I hadn't thought of the Bob angle; but that does have possibilities!
Review By [(Current Donor)Sulien] • Date [3 Jul 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Elleria
Review:
Love this.
Review By [Elleria] • Date [1 Jul 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from tosca
Review:
Nice. I really liked this snapshot.
Review By [tosca] • Date [31 Dec 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Bobboky
Review:
cool
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [30 Dec 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from TonyTheJew
Review:
When I first read the line "I know who you are," it made me think of Alma from FEAR, And I would have love to see Illyria talk to her. I've never read the The Dresden Files, But this looks ok.
Review By [TonyTheJew] • Date [30 Dec 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from ShyBob
Review:
Nice Illyria characterization. Good backstory tie-in, as well, especially for a short piece.

M.L.I.B.
Review By [ShyBob] • Date [30 Dec 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from matthew
Review:
Ilyria and the Archive. Interesting...
Review By [matthew] • Date [29 Dec 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Moderator)Ava
Review:
Oh, now that was just shiny. I love the use of minor characters and I knew this one! I really should start up the Dresden series again.
Review By [(Moderator)Ava] • Date [29 Dec 09] • Not Rated
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