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Review of chapter "The One Where Blood is Shed in a Good Cause" from (Recent Donor)DaveTurner
Review:
OH NO! You didn't finish it!!!!

How will I survive?

You have a very good point, why are people always jumping into Glory's portal, while loads of things are coming out?

Very funny series of drabbles, hope you finish them one day.

D.
Comments from author:
I'll write more when I can - it certainly isn't over.
Review By [(Recent Donor)DaveTurner] • Date [13 Aug 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The One Where Blood is Shed in a Good Cause" from kweandee
Review:
lmao....chap 4 & 5 were the best :p
Comments from author:
Should be more eventually.
Review By [kweandee] • Date [14 Jul 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The One Where Blood is Shed in a Good Cause" from JediKnight
Review:
Very funny job on the new part, I'm hoping to read more soon.

-Are you familiar with the "Artemis Fowl" book series?

-Edit: Do you mean you read the whole book?
Comments from author:
Thanks, glad you're enjoying it.

Think I looked at the first AF book, wasn't interested enough to read more.
Review By [JediKnight] • Date [26 Jun 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The One Where Blood is Shed in a Good Cause" from Dusel
Review:
Ok...this was good. Aspecially the last one. :D
Comments from author:
The first one is more of a transition to the action sequence, explaining how Willow etc. will be there when the Seattle Base is taken down.
Review By [Dusel] • Date [25 Jun 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The One Where Blood is Shed in a Good Cause" from DigiEmissary
Review:
The robots being named May, June, July, and August is hilarious. :D
Comments from author:
If you want a rational explanation... Warren developed April as the prototype (see I Was Made To Love You) then sold the plans to Doctor Evil (or Evil stole them) who added the nipple guns. If I recall correctly Willow knew that April was modelled on Miss April; if she researched she might know that the next ones were modelled on Miss May etc.

If you want another explanation, it did seem funnier that way...
Review By [DigiEmissary] • Date [25 Jun 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The One Where Blood is Shed in a Good Cause" from (Current Donor)Shieldage
Review:
Awesome. So, is Willow planning to keep August for herself or hook her up with the Buffybot? ;)
Comments from author:
She has a cunning plan...
Review By [(Current Donor)Shieldage] • Date [25 Jun 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The One Where Evil Hears From His Sponsors" from CrystalBlaze
Review:
That's absolutely delightful.
Comments from author:
Thanks - sooner or later I will have to start tying all of the plot threads together...
Review By [CrystalBlaze] • Date [20 Jun 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The One Where Evil Hears From His Sponsors" from JediKnight
Review:
Very good job on your work for this fic.

-Edit: Are you familiar with the book series "39 Clues"?
Comments from author:
Thanks!

- don't know the book.
Review By [JediKnight] • Date [19 Jun 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The One Where Evil Hears From His Sponsors" from CPTSkip
Review:
Bravo! Truly inspired. Death to Starbucks! I mean the coffee cartel, not the pilot.
Comments from author:
Well, the Dr. Evil version anyway...
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [18 Jun 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The One Where Evil Hears From His Sponsors" from RockyWilliams
Review:
Heh. I like these shorts. Clever and entertaining :)
Comments from author:
Thanks!
Review By [RockyWilliams] • Date [18 Jun 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The One Where Evil Hears From His Sponsors" from Dusel
Review:
Bullshitiest song I've ever heard, I swear!
Comments from author:
I've tried to use the rhythm scheme of the Bad Horse songs in Dr. Horrible - if you don't like it, I'm open to suggestions for a replacement.
Review By [Dusel] • Date [18 Jun 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The One Where Evil Hears From His Sponsors" from TAO
Review:
So I'm reading this fic and drinking my mocha and found myself choking on it from laughing...this last chapter in particular.
Comments from author:
;-)
Review By [TAO] • Date [18 Jun 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The One Where Evil Hears From His Sponsors" from Ignotus
Review:
Hitting the coffee supply really would lead to pandemonium I think. So glad I don't drink it. (It's funny though, I love the smell but cannot stand the taste.)

Nice inclusion of Dr. Horrible. I really like the drabble format. It always amazes me just how much story can fit into one-hundred words.
Comments from author:
Thanks!
Review By [Ignotus] • Date [18 Jun 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The One Where Evil Hears From His Sponsors" from (Current Donor)MaxGSandeman
Review:
No one thought of tea. It has caffeine in it too.
Comments from author:
Seriously? You're expecting logic here?
Review By [(Current Donor)MaxGSandeman] • Date [18 Jun 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The One Where Voodoo is Considered" from JediKnight
Review:
Funny job, hoping for more. Could you please stop making the story out of drabbles and do full-length chapters instead?
Comments from author:
Sorry, I like writing Drabbles,
Review By [JediKnight] • Date [1 Jun 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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