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Review of chapter "Prologue" from Piterio
Review:
Well that was fun. To bad it ended.
Review By [Piterio] • Date [26 Nov 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Prologue" from Genuka
Review:
This is great! I really hope you continue it.
Looking forward to anything else on this you put out.
Review By [Genuka] • Date [2 Apr 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Prologue" from (Recent Donor)Hawklan
Review:
nice start so far even if I actually have no clue about that "stand in " thing, but I
would like to see where your are leading us in this story
Review By [(Recent Donor)Hawklan] • Date [2 Mar 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Prologue" from banner
Review:
This is an interesting concept. But, since I haven't read any Batman comics in decades, who is possessing Xander?
Review By [banner] • Date [19 Feb 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Prologue" from Kumoatsu
Review:
Now this is well written! Seriously I have no idea who he dressed up as but I am still hooked already and it's only been one chapter!

Please update again soon and hopefully continue on after Halloween after you are initally finished.
Comments from author:
I'll give you a big hint: Knightfall.
Review By [Kumoatsu] • Date [3 Jan 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Prologue" from Bobboky
Review:
excellent work
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [3 Jan 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Prologue" from purrfus
Review:
Oh yes! More please.
Review By [purrfus] • Date [2 Jan 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Prologue" from mithrilandtj
Review:
Carlton Lehah?
Who the hell is that?
Review By [mithrilandtj] • Date [2 Jan 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Prologue" from Tjin
Review:
Az-Bat, you have him going as the fricken az-bat?

ooh god that guy was three shits short of a full dump, i just hope you don't have anyone else dress up as Bruce.
Comments from author:
True that.... Jean Paul aka Azrael is one of the most maligned, and yet, very interesting characters to ever come out of the Knightfall storyline. Before he went stir-crazy, he was the only other candidate that Bruce actually gave the "go" to wear the cape and cowl should anything happen to him other than Dick Grayson (who declined initially).

At the end of the Jean Paul Valley era.... he started showing signs of stability, this is where I "got" him from. He supposedly died, but his body was never found, and thus that is where the story starts with Xander.

Xander on the other hand, bought a generic batman costume, never realizing he'd get Jean rather than Bruce stuck in his head.

I toyed with the idea of having Xander be Terry McGinnis, but for the life of me, I just couldn't figure out how to introduce the kind of costume Terry had. Jean was the only other "Bat" that had the capability of making a workable outfit out of nothing but spare parts other than Dick and Tim.
Review By [Tjin] • Date [2 Jan 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Prologue" from darthridian
Review:
ohh, this is going to be interesting.

hope to read more soon.
Review By [darthridian] • Date [2 Jan 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Prologue" from Moontrap
Review:
I like it!

Sunnydale wont know what hit them. Thank you for letting us read your work and I can't wait to read more of it.

Signed

John
Review By [Moontrap] • Date [2 Jan 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Prologue" from Riniko
Review:
Nice, don't know this version of the Batman your using, but it is interesting.
Review By [Riniko] • Date [2 Jan 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Prologue" from kayron
Review:
Millionair playboy Bruce Wayne was actually very intelligent, inventive and fit. These would be great attributes for Xander to have. However, this Batman doesn't appear to have been Bruce Wayne. So, who has Xander turned into?
Comments from author:
The only thing bad about being the actual Bruce Wayne was the fact he very nearly had a strict no-kill policy. That's something that could get Xander killed in the long run if he decided to stick to that one.... so no, instead, he got the replacement Bat: Jean Paul Valley.
Review By [kayron] • Date [2 Jan 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Prologue" from MarcusSLazarus
Review:
Hold on a minute; Xander ended up going as AZ-BATS?

Now THAT is going to create more than a FEW problems when he gets back to normal; what happens if he retains 'the System'...?
Comments from author:
That's going to be the ongoing theme of this story; a bit of character study as Xander tries to control who he has become. Will he be an Agent of the Bat in this world? Will Azreal completely take over him? Or will he be something else?
Review By [MarcusSLazarus] • Date [2 Jan 10] • Not Rated
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