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The Course Of True Love Never Did Run Smooth

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Review of chapter "Chapter Eight" from banner
Review:
* laughing hysterically *

Thank you! That was purely delightful from beginning to end. Wonderful stuff - absolutely up to the INCREDIBLE standard set by phouka.
Review By [banner] • Date [17 Jan 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Eight" from Cutiepie
Review:
True that the dryad does not ever leave her tree, but we do know that she has/does magic of a sort. So, in your version of the Phouka-verse, perhaps she can do something similar to astral projection? And she never actually did leave her tree, but was still able to physically "visit" D'hofferen in his own office? Maybe is it difficult to do so she would only do it for a very important reason (like her champion's happiness)?

Or she can only go to a plane/dimension where she doesn't already have a physical representation. That is, Earth has her House, and the Grove is where she and her Tree are located, but Asha...[whatever the name of D'Hofferen's homeworld is] does not hold any part of her, permanently.

All in all, a very fun story and I enjoyed it. I suppose that if you are going to have Faith/Wood work out, Xander/Dawn isn't too bad of a choice, and you wrote the situation well. What can I say, at heart I am really a Faith/Xander fan. =]
Review By [Cutiepie] • Date [9 Jan 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Eight" from (Moderator)jrabbit
Review:
That section on the means of dealing with the species racoonus interruptus seemed to be written with a bit too much authority on the subject for it to be purely research for the fic...

Fun story.
Comments from author:
Ain't telling.
Review By [(Moderator)jrabbit] • Date [8 Jan 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Seven" from Mcspender
Review:
Awww, True Romance.
She & He alone... and a spy sat, one platoon of slayers, one mean rabbit, one driad & and a lot more people surrounding them ;).
See ya!!
Review By [Mcspender] • Date [7 Jan 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Six" from Rosetta
Review:
You have a very ...interesting... mind.

I like!

Keep on writing and sharing, please?!


Rosetta
Review By [Rosetta] • Date [6 Jan 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from Ghostrider
Review:
The utter insanity you've created here is indeed worthy of the Scooby Seal of Approval (put that ball back down, stupid seal!)

Ahem.

The description of the FBI agents, especially the newcomer, was hilarious. The rabbit..... why do I have the feeling we'll be seeing him impersonating a dog chasing cars pretty soon? And General Douglas MacWells?

Oi!
Review By [Ghostrider] • Date [5 Jan 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from AlexiDrake
Review:
Great story, but I am trying very hard not to laugh my head off at times.......
Review By [AlexiDrake] • Date [5 Jan 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from Cutiepie
Review:
Mmmm. Let me guess. The restaurant where this sting was set to take place is also the restaurant where the date in question is going to happen/begin? Man, are they being thorough! Can't risk ANYTHING potentially damaging or interrupting the "moment", I suppose. Personally, I am not a Dawn/Xander shipper, but the lengths that the gang is going to on this is enough to retain my attention to the story. =]
Review By [Cutiepie] • Date [4 Jan 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Current Donor)dogbertcarroll
Review:
LOL!
Review By [(Current Donor)dogbertcarroll] • Date [2 Jan 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Past Donor)LiastraLee
Review:
The difference is that the dryad left her glade, right? I don't think she's supposed to do that. That's all I could think of.

It's funny though.
Review By [(Past Donor)LiastraLee] • Date [2 Jan 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from TheMaskedLurker
Review:
--'{@

You gotta love 'em,
Over-protective spirits.
From a long distance.
Review By [TheMaskedLurker] • Date [2 Jan 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
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