Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Dapsy
Generally I avoid very short/short stories... often they seem to lack beginning or feel as if there was something missing at the end, or maybe in between. Or perhaps they leave you with feeling that there should be something more even if you are not sure what... but, I must say... this story does not do leave you with any feelings like that.
It is a very good short and I enjoyed reading it.
Review By [Dapsy
] • Date [10 Mar 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Hawklan
hmm nice short fic, maybe you should think about expanding it a bit *g*
Review By [Hawklan
] • Date [25 Feb 10] • Not Rated