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Review of chapter "Breathe" from (Recent Donor)Luna
Review:
This was awesome :D
Review By [(Recent Donor)Luna] • Date [27 Mar 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Breathe" from TwistedSlinky
Review:
Oh, wow, what a beautiful one-shot. I was trying to pick a Dawn story for the CoA vote and I'm definitely voting for you :D Nicely done! I'll have to check out the rest of the series some time.
Review By [TwistedSlinky] • Date [16 Sep 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Breathe" from BerserkerNW
Review:
Ouch! Poor Dawn. Good for Sam, though. This is a good fic. Thanks for sharing!
Review By [BerserkerNW] • Date [13 Sep 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Breathe" from daydreamer
Review:
I really like this story, especially for the fact how you ended it, leaving Dawn invisible. The ending has a great impact.
Review By [daydreamer] • Date [17 Jan 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Breathe" from Scrappychic
Review:
Wonderful! Glad to hear it's part of a series. :)
I'll be watching for more.
Review By [Scrappychic] • Date [7 Jan 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Breathe" from fatewalker
Review:
There has GOT to be a sequel to this!
Review By [fatewalker] • Date [6 Jan 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Breathe" from (Past Donor)Kiara
Review:
Lovely ficlet. I notice from other reviews that this is the first in a series, so I am very much looking forward to reading more.
Thanks, Kx
Comments from author:
Thank you muchly, and I'm so glad you liked it :D
Review By [(Past Donor)Kiara] • Date [5 Jan 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Breathe" from starshinedown
Review:
Dawn and I were just getting out hopes up. Gah. I sincerely hope that off the page, after the end of the one-shot, she's included and not discarded.

Thank you for sharing!
Comments from author:
Thank YOU for reading :D

And this is actually the first in a series, so there's more to come - Dawn won't be discarded that easily.
Review By [starshinedown] • Date [5 Jan 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Breathe" from banner
Review:
This one is chilling. Dawn's pain is so beautifully described. Well done.
Comments from author:
Thank you so very much :)
Review By [banner] • Date [5 Jan 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Breathe" from niinii
Review:
Amazing Story :) I would love to read a sequel of this.

I can definitely see Dawn and Sam bonding over their older siblings.
Comments from author:
Thank you very much! :D

This is actually the first in a series, so there's more to come soon. And I can definitely see Sam and Dawn bonding over their annoying older siblings - and, if they were around, Buffy and Dean bonding over their just as annoying younger siblings. It would be a mutual bitch-fest (even though they obviously all love each other, heh)
Review By [niinii] • Date [5 Jan 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Breathe" from Xeelia
Review:
Oh poor Dawn! Will there be more of this? Great story!!
Comments from author:
Thank you very much! :D

This particular fic is complete, but it is the first of a series, so the next fic should be up soon :)
Review By [Xeelia] • Date [5 Jan 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Breathe" from namegoeshere
Review:
This was really great. It gave me the good bad-tingles, and totally drew me in.
Comments from author:
Thank you so much! That's what I was aiming for, and I'm so glad you liked it :D
Review By [namegoeshere] • Date [5 Jan 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Breathe" from Riverchic
Review:
So this totally sucks.

...

JK.

I know I've said this tons, but this is an awesome story. The flow, the voices, the angst (like that's a problem for you). Love this and love you. So reccing this all over the place!
Comments from author:
*goes off to wail in a corner*

Me? Angst? I know not what you speak.

...

Love you, too
Review By [Riverchic] • Date [4 Jan 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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