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Review of chapter "Chapter 18" from JinaSolo
Review:
More please!

But have her call Anita. They are friends. And some people are humans. They need Jails...
Review By [JinaSolo] • Date [15 Jun 14] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 18" from (Recent Donor)nerfherder
Review:
The story is a lot of fun and it is well crafted! Need more!
Review By [(Recent Donor)nerfherder] • Date [20 Feb 14] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Seventeen" from Markelo
Review:
Good read.
Review By [Markelo] • Date [6 Jul 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Sixteen" from PATM
Review:
Good read.
Review By [PATM] • Date [6 Feb 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Twelve" from Xeelia
Review:
That was great! I loved Dawn deciding to share with Anita and help her. Great work!
Review By [Xeelia] • Date [24 Jan 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Six" from Xeelia
Review:
Poor JC, he's sooo gonna get an earfull about this! Great Chapter! Can't wait for more!!
Review By [Xeelia] • Date [14 Jan 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Prologue" from (Recent Donor)Luna
Review:
I'm enjoying your writing style, enough to read this story even though I am completely confused (I have no knowledge of the Champions Universe and had never heard of it til now). So far, things sound really promising and it'll be interesting to see what role the Anitaverse has.
Review By [(Recent Donor)Luna] • Date [13 Jan 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from littleoldme
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I'm still loving this! And I'm looking forward to seeing Dawn meet Jean-Claude. Did Asher realize before seeing her tonight how very young she is? I was expecting a little more surprise!
Review By [littleoldme] • Date [11 Jan 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from Xeelia
Review:
Things are getting more and more interesting!! Can't wait for more!!
Review By [Xeelia] • Date [10 Jan 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from AllenPitt
Review:
Gee, I sure hope this isn't Willow desperately trying to resurrect Buffy. And after all, vampires aren't people, to her... not so sure about the lycanthropes. I could see Dark Willow going to any lengths. Might need an actual Necromancer like Anita or one of her coworkers to make it work, though.
I hope you don't load Dawn up with too many super powers.... she should have an edge, but too much makes the story less interesting. I like that Asher probably figured out she was the one at the warehouse...
* Even though it was called off, the attempt to raise Joyce ... maybe Dawn is a necromancer & just needs training?
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [7 Jan 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Prologue" from emelan
Review:
Kudos for the prompt but well-written new chapter. Thank you for Asher, he's one of my favourite's, look forward to reading more. Good treatment on resolving mine and PATM's query on the anti-lycanthropy drugs for other readers and reminder that for all that Dawn's got 100 years of memories she is still a teenager at high school now. Much appreciated
Review By [emelan] • Date [7 Jan 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from littleoldme
Review:
This is a fascinating story- I love seeing a teenage Dawn who's got a hundred years of experience behind her. It makes for a nice mix in her character, and makes a lot of the powers you've given her seem perfectly reasonable.
Review By [littleoldme] • Date [7 Jan 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from emelan
Review:
I agree with PATM on the spelling but the few typos don't detract from an interesting new storyline for Dawn. I'm guessing that like Richard in Anita Blake, Mary was infected with a bad batch of anti-Lycanthropy serum. Could do to flesh these points out to stop confusion for readers who are not familiar with the AB series. You are off to a great start and I look forward to tracking.
Review By [emelan] • Date [6 Jan 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from PATM
Review:
defiantly should be definitely, scarred instead of scared etc. Anti-lycanthropy drugs infect a
non sufferer with lycanthropy? Clarify please or was the family conned with scare science?
I think Canadian spelling is trumped with Canadian sentence structure,lol. Leaving the aside
the destruction of the Dawn Summers that Buffy knew, not bad. Keep going.
Review By [PATM] • Date [5 Jan 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from Glongi
Review:
Very... interesting.

I am familiar with Buffy and Anita Blake universe, but this third throws me into a loop.

But well written.
Review By [Glongi] • Date [5 Jan 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
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