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Why Buffy and Dawn Hate Turnips

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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from CrystalBlaze
Review:
If this goes the way I expect, no wonder they hate turnips.

I swear to God, between that and the don't-give-up theme, eventually the official movie for the IWC is gonna be *It's A Wonderful Life*...
Comments from author:
I hate that movie with a passion, so don't worry about it appearing in any of MY stories *shudders*
Review By [CrystalBlaze] • Date [6 Jan 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Recent Donor)thetwitmachine
Review:
good setup, although I'm not sure revealing the entire setup in the first chapter before any actual action is a good idea.

The title tells me its about turnips, then with the buffy/dawn discussion I learn EVERYTHING about the demon, including the acid spray (ok), the vegetable allergy (funny), and then dimensional goop (should have left that out I think, because it lets me know too much). Also the veil reference wasn't really needed I don't think.

I'm interested in seeing how the rest turns out.
Review By [(Recent Donor)thetwitmachine] • Date [6 Jan 10] • Not Rated
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