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Winds of Apocalypse: The Gathering Storm

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Review of chapter "Chapter 6" from YoruHana
Review:
Damn, I wish you'd written more.
Review By [YoruHana] • Date [9 Apr 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 6" from kaleecat
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as i've been watching 'walking dead' on amc I decided to re-read your story. I do hope you'll update at some point as it's an intelligent take on it w/ the actual planning for defense & gathering supplies. I like the interaction between xander and giles in this; that giles let's xander take the organizational lead. I like this and want to see where it goes. oh and lets hope the girls who cleaned out the first aid aisles stopped at the feminine care aisle with all those slayers. (grin)
Review By [kaleecat] • Date [6 Dec 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 6" from grd
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Love the build up. Armor. I hope you have the survivors wear some kind of armor. Heck even a leather jacket would help. Hated movies where stupid people wore short sleeves.
Review By [grd] • Date [16 Jun 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 6" from redlittletree
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I love it!!! Can't wait for the next chapter.
Review By [redlittletree] • Date [15 Jun 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 6" from AllenPitt
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Hopefully they won't do the "split up and check out the dark areas individually "because it'll be faster!" that's one of the most annoying horror film tropes. So--Rona--got scratched? Might be 'infected' ? Something to watch for... hm...still-crawling zombie parts that were in with her?
But at some point you can only do what you can think of doing...
I don't suppose there's any stores that would have battery powered radios / ham radio equipment anything like that? Just a thought.
One thing people almost never do in these films--get protective gear to protect against bites / scratches... maybe the mall crawl can uncover something along those lines.
And wow--their vehicle INSIDE the protected area. That NEVER happens in a zombie film
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [15 Jun 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from Rivana
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Damn I love Apocalypse fic. Great going!
Review By [Rivana] • Date [18 May 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from Gideon
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Not a good situation but they are doing their best to prepare well.
I hope Slayers are immune.
Review By [Gideon] • Date [18 May 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from lamusicalady
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you've really nailed that creeping hinky feeling good zombie stories give ya. Freaking love this story.

awesomesauce.
Review By [lamusicalady] • Date [18 May 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from ebony
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WTF!?
Review By [ebony] • Date [17 May 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from Nightscream
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oooo now that was a bit scary! I really thought that Rona had bit it. I can't wait for more of this, so I hope you update again soon.
Review By [Nightscream] • Date [17 May 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from FireFlyFan
Review:
I like this story. A good zombie movie is always fun and it is rare to see the characters actually doing something smart instead of just running around screaming. One suggestion I would make is to maybe cut back on using descriptions instead of names. Seeing things like "the Boston native","the Californian Carpenter" and "the girl who once burned downed the gym at Hemmery High" when all you are trying to do is say Faith, Xander and Buffy is kind of annoying. There is nothing wrong with just using the characters names. Other then that it is good stuff.
Review By [FireFlyFan] • Date [17 May 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from cary
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This is shaping up to be a great story.
Thx for sharing
Review By [cary] • Date [17 May 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from AllenPitt
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That went better than it would have in any zombie movie I've ever seen. By this point at least 1 or 2 would have gotten bit/attacked in an aisle etc. Go team slayer! arrows running out, yep. They need to improvise weapons that don't require reloading. Maybe pole arms ie pikes / spears, that kind of thing....
Comments from author:
Don't worry, there will be biting...

*wicked EVIL grin*
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [17 May 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from batzulger
Review:
Gah! That was tense...
Review By [batzulger] • Date [17 May 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from djhardim
Review:
Good to see more of this.

I hope to see more from you in the future.

Are you still planning on posting your Divergent Destinies stories here?
Comments from author:
Yep, am planning to... I've been trying to recover the files from my USB drive, which puked all over the place... Been working on some projects at home as well. Most of the big ones are done, and the next one is to move the computers back to the home office area (once I get the communication hub assembled in the basement).

Then, MAYBE, I can start writing again

Ice
Review By [djhardim] • Date [17 May 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
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