More, please. This is an interesting take on the Yet Another Halloween Fic (YAHF) theme. Very nicely done, so far, and I can't wait to find out what happens with Xander's third possession from a Chaos spell. I hope your muse and schedule will allow you to write and post more chapters sometime soon. Keep up the good work. Zafaran {mailto:} zafaran {at} fastmail {dot} fm
Review By [zafaran] • Date [12 Jan 10] • Not Rated
I actually wasn't going to read this story because it was based on something about a Pet Shop Detective. I was browsing through the Charmed section, and this story came up, so I decided to give it a try. I find it very interesting that Xander got the powers of both incarnations (good and bad) of Wyatt. As both versions,Wyatt was a really powerful magic user. I'd like to see how this new aspect of Xander plays out. Xander becoming Charles Kowalski, a member of Stargate Comand, makes an ineresting choice too. I'd love to see both of these character aspects worked more into the story. I don't know anything about the pet detective. I look forward to seeing if this character is as interesting as the first two.
Review By [kayron] • Date [11 Jan 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
